she fears
most never finding the woman
she once was and hopes she has
simply misplaced her between
the breaths of her yesterdays
and the silence of being alone
An exquisite poem, my friend.
Love and hugs,
Katie
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2007
I'm glad this reflects places she has been, not where she is today. She was never misplaced; she was there all the time, and still is. I like reading her poetry. This is a beautifully written study in living through the grieving process.
~Butch Howard
Myrna - Your excellently written poem is another reminder of lives that have been halved by death. No, you aren't this woman, but at times, you believe that you are. When you are bold enough to step away and look at the situation, you may find the price too high and discouraging. Keep in mind the true meaning of these words: Life... Pleasure... Together... Laughter... Sharing... and when it applies... Innoocent Intimacy.
Dear friend, it's not easy being alone... so, stay open for unexpected and breezy change... okay?
Your older, widowed, and Solid Friend -
- Bill
It is those places that we have been that color the fabric of who we are today...yet another beautiful example of this form that is so well suited to you lady poet.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
she fears
most never finding the woman
she once was and hopes she has
simply misplaced her between
the breaths of her yesterdays
and the silence of being alone
An exquisite poem, my friend.
Love and hugs,
Katie
~Butch Howard
Be safe,
Karen
Fee
Regis
Dear friend, it's not easy being alone... so, stay open for unexpected and breezy change... okay?
Your older, widowed, and Solid Friend -
- Bill
Another work well done
thankyou,it get s better after each read.
stan nassano
Thank God this is not you. Been there, though, can see it in your words. We've all been. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.