Do you think she might take that to hear, that little f--t? Ron, this romance simply blew over and away before it had a chance to mature. Could it have been the manure? May love and peace be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Oh Ron, you are a trip!

what a great mixture of chuckles...boo-hoo hoo

Don't know why, but it brings to mind the old Alice Cooper song "I'll Never Cry": "If there's a tear (in my eye) on my face, it makes me shiver to the bone, shakes me babe... my heart's a virgin it's never been tried... and you know, I'll never cry, I'll never cry."

You delve deeply into the woods we're not out of with a catchy variation on the "You're-not-telling-me-anything-I-don't-already-know" motif... hilarious at points, tragi-comic at others, and entirely 'real' and relevant throughout... replete with delicious ironic closing line... nice work, Ronald.



Roger

Loved 'Dialation.' Such irony in this well-written poem brought a smile to my face.

stay Kool and hot
peace be with you

William

Living today for the memories of tomorrow,
quite enjoyed, Ron

Lady Vivian

Giggle...you had me laughing out loud!!! Awesome!

Anna

You had fun with this one. Ironically, it contains many elements of a seriously tragic relationship memory. Well done.

Hi Ron,
I am slightly disappointed in you, I thought you would have written a poem and swept her off her feet in your usual manner...

Though, it’s possible when she shone that light to the back of your eyes she saw strange things emerge.

I wonder if she keeps a diary.

Best regards,

Mor.

It was flagellation, I know,
with a backside bended,
that upset the apple cart.

That usually does ruin the moment!!

You loved every minute of it!

Love ya!

Jane

When you are hot, you're hot!

God made us all different, but in His own image.

Amen!

Good stuff.

Good Grief, Ronald, this poem really gave me a laugh.
I've always liked rhyming poetry but this is a real classic.
Congrats on this one.
I'll check out a few more because I like rhyming lines.

Ron, Perhaps you should have told her how hot she was.

Always,

Deborah

Business as usual. I'm sure she would forgive your jaded thoughts if she even knew Ron. Bob

Better than penile dysfunction in the eye. It all comes and goes.

I see a moon in the eye above.With your eyes you devoured,that is it

When I was a boy a wise old farmer once told me
"love is just a gust of wind coming from the heart...
unless it takes the lower course, then it's just a farrrrt!"
Maybe you met him.

Hmm..interesting.

Oh come on, u get all the girls...the pity factor works well...;-) (thanks for the pointed review of my recent posting, appreciated)

Oh, that was funny. Original. Makes me want to write something.
L

A flurry of poetical flirtation with more things in mind than rejection. I agree, she was a little tart. Yes . . .