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Poem of the Weak
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Poem of the Weak

My head is pounding,
Stale nails, I think.
My stomach is growling,
Like tigers; I'm so weak.

I didn't celebrate New Year's Eve,
Drink too much or have to heave.
I ate right and went to bed early,
So why am I feeling so damn surly?

Didn't want to get out of bed,
Daydreams running my silly head.
Oh dread. My Poem of the weak ,
Slipped out—It’s dead!

And so I'm penning,
This poor excuse.
So much for trying,
What's the use?

Now that I'm finished,
Can crawl back to bed.
With visions of damsels,
Not classic poems--instead.

Copyright 2004 © Ronald W. Hull

1/4/04



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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
lovely enticing picture

one can only hope it's more than a dream ;-)

enjoyed your write of the week, or was it the rite of the weak

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2004
Jaysus, Ron.. another doozie! I find myself just grinning in the company of your clever wordplays and rhymes and rhythms.. there's a mournful tone to this, but you've tempered it with a zesty delivery and some of your imfamous perky words. Does that mean you 'blend well'? hehe... Great poem! katy xox.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
birthing a weak poem, now that has to be a classic ;)

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
I'll take a dream of my Braveheart over writing a poem anyday. ;)

Enjoyed Ron ty, Dani

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
It's no wonder your head hurts, the picture is taunting you. LOL!
The write was pretty cool too. :0)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Ah a kindred spirit,except I turned over to hug a certain lady in my dream,bang,fell straight on the floor, dream turned to awaking nightmare:)) If that pic'syour dream,tell her not to enter your dream so over dressed!!!

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
LOL, I know how you feel. ;) Silver

Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Ronald, I very strong write...Happy New Year.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Sweet dreams Ronald.....LOL!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Excellent write Ronald! very creative word play. Enjoyed! Hope you feel better soon!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Ooo my you do have some exciting dreams, keep dreaming and writing!
Happy New Year
~Nikki~

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Sounds OK to me. Dream on

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Not a bad vision!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Keep dreaming! :-)

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Sounds to me someone is having so much fun. Heehee!

Happy New Year to you, Ron!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Well, at least you have exciting dreams.


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