There is a sensual taste to this exquisite poem that is captivating. I reread and reread, and for me it's a song not of defiance but calm and soothing acceptance with a powerful beat!
Beautiful!
Selene

Very well written and thought provoking look at death.

very good-you said in as few words as possible an excellent poem

A very interesting, concise look at death. It teaches to be fearless, accept death as part of life, a part of oneself.

Best regards,

Axilea

Sylvia this is a very deep poem of self introspection and thought. It gave me some things to think about too in my life having survived a major non-crippling stroke that has left my right side very weak; a heart attack, and a vtach. But I have faith that the Lord is with me and will be there when I call on him to help with whatever I cannot do alone. Thank you for sharing Sylvia, and I will keep you in my prayers.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie

You made me dive into deep thought, and watch as the your world spun in my mind. Thank you for sharing…I know the times for you now must be rough. Hang in there, the lord is watching. Like your hat by the way.

An ontological jewel. Rich imagery in "a poem to: Death".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

A compelling poem that draws the reader in and demands more than a single reading. Thank you, Sylvia. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Beautifully written summary of existence. We can't leave for staying.

you echo my sentiments perfectly ...

A deep, though-provoking write. Exceptionally well penned Sylvia.
Chanti

Good to see you posting again, Sylvia.

This is exquisite...

Elizabeth