Warming myself in the midst of a seasonal death Little by little, no life will be left... I step up to the flames , My esteems in the fire! Sparks from me ponder, my needs’ burning desires!
In the heat of emotion, the embers becoming! Where God and Love blaze, my temptations succumbing... Accord of the wood, I dance in the cinders God’s terpsichore of lucifers, casting images that hinder...
Captivation crackles, In ranting it feeds... Rale’s of flame kindling, in Him or the beast? O’ swinge, in magma of red, combusting in lust... Your fires gurgle beneath, in a scalding of trust!
A poker is stirring, the holes I am digging... A dead life feasts on my wants in the crimson of tricking! In the bark of my passions, on the breeze of our Host... Can I can spit breaths of the lost as my green wood smokes...?
Adrift in the twist, A smoke blown in my face Blushed in alight, my ravages abase Arc of His light, ignite reflections afresh My Love is In Him , rather than, the incinerators of flesh!
Musing in the Fires of Flesh burns with poetic oxygen which feeds the den with these spiritual embers...has a flaming correlation to Tarot by Sage, the Firewalk card posted in my den and at Tarot by Sage where all 28 cards are posted, the religious ceremony of the Hindu religious firewalk and the Fiji paid stage performance firewalk, also has a temptation connection to my Devil's Rope Tarot by Sage card...the first paragraph, to me, indicates fasting from passion of the flesh and kindling spiritual passion and the last paragraph confirms it...a passion of religious imagery write on the upper tier of the spiritual ladder, Kimmy...
Exceptional write Kimmy, showing our duality of nature, and the battle we face daily! Superb finale!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2006
We are all tried in this world and with so much evil about, temptations are rife. It is up to us to choose what's right as you did in the end. Very beautiful poem. Victor
Captivating, inspirational, compact in its delivery of devil, flesh ,lust and the punch line that is the Almighty God and you faith in Him. great poem to end my Sunday with and contemplate your wise words.
This is outstanding work. The spirit reveals much when tempted...really liked this.
Allen
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
{{{Kimmy}}}}
this was POWERFUL girl!!!!
I "see" the message you write in a mega powerful way...You always seem to get beyond deep in the surface to the cell of what it is teaching you in spirit at the time..Powerful, powerful thoughts today, friend!!!
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Outstanding composition in the "Musings in the Fires of Flesh" strikes imagination and fills the veins of creativity.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Regis
Sage
Micke
God Bless,
Joselyn
Love tinka
Love,
Eileen
Your Spirit is speaking today.
Thank you for touching my soul with these words.
Love this!!!!
Chrissy
My Love is In Him ,
rather than,
the incinerators of flesh!
Puts the topping on the poem Kimmy. Well done.
Rusty
excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Love,
CJ
Allen
this was POWERFUL girl!!!!
I "see" the message you write in a mega powerful way...You always seem to get beyond deep in the surface to the cell of what it is teaching you in spirit at the time..Powerful, powerful thoughts today, friend!!!
Love from the dove