Up and down the stairs early
When panic did set in
The cable was out and I did pout
How can my day begin
I always check my e-mail
And then get on the Internet
Posts to read and blogs to write
And poems that make ya sit up and grin
I had no other choice
But work on the fifth novel I'd begun
It was amazing, yes it was
To see how much I got done
Without the distractions of checking
And reading and writing in rhyme
I just might finish writing this sucker
Before the end of time
YA THINK? LOL
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Reviews of "Cable out time to pout"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
What did we ever do before we had the Internet to start and finish and punctuate our days. If terrorists are failing to blow everything ut, it's probably 'cause they are too sidetracked checking their e-mail! You'll get that novel finished ...
Ted
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
Yes, me thinks you will finish..
It's impossible to read and comment
on all here at ad.....
Dat's why we have our favorites like you cuzz
your fun....and other stuff..
Lurve ya!
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
Oh this was so good Lynn! Enjoyed very much.
Hugs, Laura
Wonderful message to all. You must have read my mind. I had been meaning to tell everyone that I will get on with my new year's resolution to write my books.
What a timely piece this is! Yes, we all need time away from the net to concentrate on our writings.
Ted
It's impossible to read and comment
on all here at ad.....
Dat's why we have our favorites like you cuzz
your fun....and other stuff..
Lurve ya!
Hugs, Laura
"Cable out time to pout" glows depicting the actions as they flow.
An exceptional writing.
Keep on posting, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
What a timely piece this is! Yes, we all need time away from the net to concentrate on our writings.
Sandie Angel :o)