In his pointy shoes
With his hands
Over his head
He was feelin' good
That's what he said
The soul patrol
From my teens
The one who
Could make us move
In our jeans
I feeeeel good
Got us smilin' and happy
Not the drugs or the drink
Something simple and sappy
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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
God father of soul...
xoxoxox
Lurve ya writes cuzzzz...
Those were the good ole days, when life was good! Excellent capture of nostalgia, Lynn, well done! Who needs artificial highs when life was (IS) worth celebrating? I have enuff fun sober, don't need enhancements.
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
xoxoxox
Lurve ya writes cuzzzz...
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.