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Cackling old woman..............
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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This is for La Belle's open invitation for the "Halloween Ball". Hope you will enjoy.....


Poem Artwork


   Cackling old woman*
 


  Skies above are turning from blue to black,
dark clouds moving in not meant for man
or beast.
All young children need a place to hide,
to stay dry, gather their wits, a place to feast.

 

An old woman, hunched over leaning on 
a broom,
quietly observes many children parading past.
The old woman smiles and cackles with
joyous glee,
calling out before she sees the last.

 

"Dear children" she cries, "want to see
my surprise?"
"Made it special for you this Halloween night."
Old woman turns her back, begins to walk in.
"Wait" cry the children, "you gave us an
unpleasant fright."

 

"Come in" says the old woman. "Welcome to my
humble home."
Please take off your coats, make yourself
comfortable.
Find yourself a seat, warm your bodies by
the fire,
while I fix some food and drink, leave it on
the table.

She says, "what are you looking at, why are
you scared?"
"Is it my dress, my shoes, my hat or my hair?"
Why I am no different from you, my clothing
old and worn,
once a year I go out cackling up a storm
with flair.

 

Old woman says, "Now that you are here you
will never get out,
so you might as well eat and drink the rest of
the night."
My caldron is bubbling, ready for incantations,
to rattle your bones and fill you with
unthinkable fright.

 

House starts swaying making eerie rumbling
sounds,
lights begin flickering up and down, all around.
A silence fills the room, hearts beating rapidly,
old creatures of the night coming up from
the ground.

 

Children cry out, "but we want to go home,
our parents will worry and search everywhere."
Old woman keeps cackling, stirring her
witches brew,
knowing the first spell cast made the house
disappear.

 

All of a sudden loud knocks can be heard,
pounding so loud the children close eyes, cover
their ears.
Pounding gets louder, doors begin rattling
and creaking,
children's hearts beating fast, filled with
ghostly fears.

 

Suddenly it all stops, an eerie quiet fills the room,
children stunned, rub their eyes, afraid of what
they might see.
One child opens his eyes, begins tapping
the others,
carefully they look around and commence laughing with glee.

 

Children hear a voice in the distance, one
they recognize.
They are all back in their room, now how can
that be?
Waking up from their nap, hearing Dad say,
"are you all ready to go trick or treating
with me?"


 


Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
10/20/2007

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 Reviews of "Cackling old woman.............."
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Cute , whitty . I wondered how the kids would get out of there...........M

Reviewed on October 22, 2007
You had me scared and that's quit a feat!! Welcome to the ball Darlink.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
This is a wonderful write and so frightening for the night ahead. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
This was a true halloween treat but when I think of my kids I was hoping for a better ending like that they disappeared and never returned

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Wonderful write! Much enjoyed...reminds one of those eerie nightmares of youth...made no sense in the daylight but scared snot out of us in the dark...
All good things to you and yours,
Jim

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Earth Angel! This was truly a Halloween Treat! This was a true delight! I adore you and yore style! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
This is just frightning and fantastic ;)
Great work Karen. Loved it.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
What a fantastic write my dear friend, you've captured my attention from the first line and held me captive to the final one! What a dream! Tell Robert the picture complimented your poem well! Loved them both...bravo!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
You captivated us all with this fright night dream Kathy!Geat pic too!
Thanks for sharing!

Love,
ET

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Love this very creative great poem for Halloween. :)

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
The anticipation of Halloween's ghosts and goblins can certainly fill a child's sleep with fright. Love the orange and black print.

Kathy

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Visions of Hansel and Grettel come to mind --Charlie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Truly a time of mesmerizing dreams for many a child, of all ages. And I will definitely look for the Cackling Old Woman at La Belle's Ball!

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Karen,

You are so creative! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Karen, This is so hauntingly awesome! I just love your imagination and creativity here.
Please go into your dreams tonight with caution..lol
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
This is a cute Halloween poem. I imagine it is indicative of the imaginations of young children as they prepare to go out into the dark of night to meet ghosts and goblins.

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Good write, Karen, but I really don't celebrate Hallowe'en. Any holiday that takes precedence over CHRISTmas doesn't deserve recognition, in my eyes.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
This time I will go hunting me some nocturnal flying "birds" myself.
Georg

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Goblins & ghouls candy & cavities ~ Eggs & toilet paper ~ everything is orange until the day after & her broomstick really gets put to use ~lovingly (Count Ted)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Some dreams are so real. Well done Karen.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
I know one witch that won't be flying this year...When I left home, I took her broom.

Walt


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