I awoke to a blood red sunrise in a surreal poetic paradise~where words are used to mesmerize~as I read them through bloodshot eyes~in the beautiful garden a spectre appeared a blue neon ghost, floating in the air,slapped my face as he came near, then disappeared
I was standing in front of a mirror, the kind where your image is distorted~my face and hair were blood red,the rest of me looked like a blue horse, I wanted to scream but snorted~then I was galloping towards an ocean so close I could feel the spray, but the harder I ran it kept getting farther away~overheated, lungs ready to burst, I couldn't stop running til I was caught up in a whirlwind with everything spinning
I was dropped into a mountain crater left by a volcano~no longer a horse but a word called "human dynamo"~I was in rhyme as once more the mountain began to blow~I wound up in the lava flow~energized in spirit and ready to go I awoke to a blood red sunrise in a surreal poetic paradise~where words are used to mesmerize
and you've done a fantastic job of mesmerizing my soul with beautiful images and a spellbinding sojourn into the poetic paradise of your deepest convictions ...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2005
Surreal poem.
Lets hope Rita does never see a sunrise or sunset..
Dream interpretation: Your spiritual sensibilities(blue neon ghost/subconcious is trying to get your attention)and passion appear to be in conflict. Your red(face is distorted/outmoded self-image?) and blue horse is galloping hard towards the ocean(serenity, mutability, cleansing)but the harder he trys the further he gets. Caught up in a whirlwind(emotion)you are dropped into a crater becoming a "human dynamo" and flow...Once you integrate passion/spirit/emotion by releasing outworn attitudes that no longer suit the person you've become, you will flow on the current with all living.(Please let me know if I'm all wet, E.)
Let's hope and pray that Rita will not be cause to rue these storms and their aftermath. Great dream sequence, beautifully penned in your magnificient word descriptions.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2005
You are going to have to stop having those peppermint schnapps for breakfast, Eileen, I mean just look what happens? Just kidding, JUST kidding. Love this surrealistic poem into the strange and bizarre. Good.
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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Wow- So Powerful- Thanks for expressing the pain so vividly E.T.- WArmly and Sweetly,Sheeeoxo
peace,
carolyn
I got that backwards, that stuff is hanging over you, wish it would lay off!!
Fantastic write
Hugs
Ch'erie
peace and love, Carole
Lets hope Rita does never see a sunrise or sunset..
paradise~where words are used to mesmerize
And your words truly did, Tiger Lily.
Stunning is not the word for it...WOW, breathtaking!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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Carmen :-)
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
creepy pic, though...YIKES! LOL
You indeed has a way with words. Great write.
TX