The night glows With thousands of lights Through the creation Of cosmic delights Natures kaleidoscope Of earthly wonders Ever evolving in Rainfall and thunder Wild landscape Untouched by humanity Tempestuous winds Testing our sanity Emotions ensnared In earths ecosphere One can truly imagine Dinasaurs here Lightning that Touches off forest fires Animals seek water To escape the pyre Storms and floods That come up in a flash Volcanic eruptions Spewing lava and ash Majestic mountains Disappear into the sea While polar icebergs Sail past most ghostly It is ever happening To mother earth Always a new age about to give birth If we go with the flow It all comes out right So long as we know That we have the light There is the duality Satan's fight to retrieve God's grace,spirituality That he can't conceive Though in God's image born Was the whole human race Satan treated it with scorn He lost salvations face!
"If we go with the flow
It all comes out right
So long as we know
That we have the light '
......................I wish I had written that.
Love from Kay
p.s.your excellent poem is so inspiring.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
by Jove Eileen this is a masterpiece..I'm saving this one..thankyou!!
Oooo... hangin by a thread, is what this makes me think... how fragile is life and yet you bring it all together here... From beginning to end and beyond, in both dereliction and salvation. Amazing what you have managed to convey with such sharp and intense focus. All the ages of this old earth and all the purposes in and under heaven. So graphic, Eileen. Well done. Packs a punch and a message. TY Kate xx
W O W!!!!!!!!!!!! A powerful write, Eileen; amidst the darkness and devastations portrayed, there is hope.......GOD is in control!!!!!!! BRAVA, another keeper.......my library is full of your poetry. Wouldn't have it any other way. Congratulations! :)
EARTH GIVES BIRTH moves and glows with the primordial quakings of creation, destruction, and redemption. A poem delivered like a diamond from the depths of true faith, awareness, hope, and conviction.
Exquisite image Sugar Creek Chum. Such a write feels permeated with a peculiar majesty that opens His arms to accept us in. Delightful. The angels are surely applauding these thoughts.
Eileen,
The earth turns, just as the seasons change. Man with his out of control ego, does truly believe he, has the ability to change what God has made and continues to maintain, on his own.
It has nothing to do with mankind, and the sooner we realize it, the better off we will be!
Excellent work!
You have done a beautiful job of letting the power and beauty
speak through you. Chose the perfect way to illustrate the piece,
to boot. Write ON !! 'Pea' <3
A beautiful storm... which describes your writing to a 'T'! I Love it.... thanks for sharing your gifts once again!
RM Green
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
I love a good storm :-) and enjoy a great write like this :-)
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
AMEN
A beautiful piece of work in this one outstanding
"That we have the light
There is the duality
Satan's fight to retrieve
God's grace,spirituality
That he can't conceive
Though in God's image born
Was the whole human race
Satan treated it with scorn
He lost salvations face!"
YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shalom,
Joselyn
The earth evolves with or without us, it is true, but we each leave our footprints here and once we do, the entire universe will never again be the same. There certainly is a duality in all things, and every culture embraces it and offers us the opportunity to choose good or evil, right or wrong, God or Satan. Beautiful poem with colorfully vibrant images.
Take care,
Sherry
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Dinasaurs here"
Yes we can, and do.
Beautiful piece of writing and I appreciate you.
Ted
Ron
It all comes out right
So long as we know
That we have the light '
......................I wish I had written that.
Love from Kay
p.s.your excellent poem is so inspiring.
vesna:)
Love,
CJ
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Kewl spiro poem..
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Aberjhani
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
To mother earth
Always a new age
about to give birth
If we go with the flow
It all comes out right
I hope you are right, Tiger Lily - but I'm not convinced that Global Warming - is natural.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The earth turns, just as the seasons change. Man with his out of control ego, does truly believe he, has the ability to change what God has made and continues to maintain, on his own.
It has nothing to do with mankind, and the sooner we realize it, the better off we will be!
Excellent work!
Lisa
Carmen
Love, Suzie :-D
speak through you. Chose the perfect way to illustrate the piece,
to boot. Write ON !! 'Pea' <3
peace,
carolyn
RM Green
A beautiful piece of work in this one outstanding
"That we have the light
There is the duality
Satan's fight to retrieve
God's grace,spirituality
That he can't conceive
Though in God's image born
Was the whole human race
Satan treated it with scorn
He lost salvations face!"
YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shalom,
Joselyn
Take care,
Sherry