Very nice - the chain repetition really works reading through, and is cyclical, the 'hummingbird hovers' at the beginning and end is the energetic in this cycle, the smiling sun and other elements smiling quietly in the background - first haiku seems the most striking - reminds me of a stinky poem i wrote about male and female wasps, and Orchids - Orphrys -an amazing Orchid, and an interesting interspecies love story. Enjoyed! Nicky x
Wonderful music, wonderful art, beautiful chain! Now I know what a haiku chain is. You must have one fine folder of music files. I put this poem in my save folder. Thanks La Belle.
Beauty to you, michael
Ditto is dangerous,muddled minds flow,and I answer. Is that a ku? Ditto what Felix said. When I grow up I want to be a writer as you inspire. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>
As a writer who cannot write Ku's but thoroughly enjoy them, this is a chain that flows like a soft bubbling brook...melodious and pure. I enjoyed it so much.
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Wonderful write and neat music La Belle
With love,
Ron
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PS: Peaceful, too!!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I just love those little Hummers. :)
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Love ya,
Ann
LaBelle
It was peace of mind
Love.
William
Beauty to you, michael
Newfie Hugs,Rose
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