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Spring Bride
by Susan M Phillips → (All Poetry by Susan M Phillips)
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I thought it was about time I did some more poetry. Apologies for the quality - just flexing my prosodic muscles and finding them a bit creaky.
This is a poem inspired by an unexpected snowfall last week. The picture is a montage of photographs taken that morning.


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SPRING BRIDE

The snow in Spring drifts like a feather quilt
With patches, here and there, of leaf and bloom
While sunshine touches all with gleaming gilt;
But as the day warms, it will vanish soon.

A watering can bride awaits her groom
Resplendent in her gown of crystal silt.
He lies beneath the coverlet, entombed.
The snow in Spring drifts like a feather quilt.

What tragedy that tender shoots must wilt
Although there isn't any hint of gloom;
But even now we see it start to melt
With patches, here and there, of leaf and bloom.

Our bride laments: tears wash away her gown
As he lies there dead, naked to the hilt
And none will tell her how he met his doom
And sunshine touches all with gleaming guilt.

"Why choose to die when he could simply jilt,"
She asks and then lets slip the last galloon
The guilty snow is running off, full tilt
Towards the warming day and then it's gone.
The snow in Spring drifts.

 

Copyright 2008 Susan M Phillips

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 Reviews of "Spring Bride"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
An excellent and well written poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
Wish you would write good words like this about Summertime. I know you can do it and I'd love to hear more of you on the den and read some more.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
There's something very special about an unexpected spring snowfall. You express this effectively here, Susan. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
What a sweet and pleasant surprise! Almost as welcome a gift when it comes when we least suspect it....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
This is super good. ...melting into Spring's warmth-- ...snuggling down into the quilt-- ...flowers springing up-- ...shaking out the past-- ...these are ways melting snow it like a feather quilt. --Charlie

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
Fantastic write, Sue! I love it...
What form is this written in? Is this a rondeau redouble? No matter what form it is, I am impressed. I don't know that I want to get into an arm wrestling match with you! I fear the "Spring Bride" will win!

Cryssa :~)


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