lightning divides the dun colored clouds in two as the tears gather like rain falling in sympathy to my pain. and here, here i sit, as usual ... alone ... in the bathroom with razor in hand, ready to release the storm that is pulsing underneath my blood ... and the wind complains bitterly; it whispers dark and deadly secrets in my ear; seduces me with silky tones; it points the way to happiness. I am too slow ... and the wind tells me to go f*** myself. I hang my head in shame. I want the wind to come back and tell me to hurry - hurry and get this damn thing done and over with, but there is no answer from the clouds. thunder voices its pain and somehow i know what it is talking about - we are brothers, thunder and i, as we rail against the indecisions we face.
Am so glad you aren't like this; but still...you write of the frustrations that many people face. Excellent emotion, hardhitting, no holds barred anger enimates from this poem! Very well done; brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
My life exactly sis. Thnx for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With muchlove in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Karla,
I, like the others are relieved it isn't about you, but there is a mighty message within for somebody, maybe even masses of somebody.
You gave your muse the pen, and done quite well!
Lisa
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Thank God it's NOT about YOU!! However it is about many others..
these times are heavy with darkness..let's speed up the light..
Great write Karla...
A poignant story about letting go of a narcissist in your life. Have you ever been attacked FULL force by a narcissist? It's the closest thing to being stabbed over and over in the back.
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Am so glad you aren't like this; but still...you write of the frustrations that many people face. Excellent emotion, hardhitting, no holds barred anger enimates from this poem! Very well done; brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
That picture is too cool! :)
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Love Tinka
I, like the others are relieved it isn't about you, but there is a mighty message within for somebody, maybe even masses of somebody.
You gave your muse the pen, and done quite well!
Lisa
these times are heavy with darkness..let's speed up the light..
Great write Karla...
Vesna*
Here's hoping that the pain of indecision is heal with the power of choice.
Be good.
God Bless
Michelle!
Glad it's not about you!;-)(only a tiny bit)
Love,
Eileen
Felix