Or di na ry (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

(((Karla)))

How'd I MISS this one?? Oh, my God, I am slacking off! SHAME! LOL

Nothing ordinary about this write, this write is EXTRAordinary! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *blushing* LOL

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

A wonderful heartfelt write
But I Do know And hope you ain't
leaveing us just yet
You have too much poetry within you
Still
It will take a life time
to allow it all to spill
Onto the parchment
that awaits all your wisdom.

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Karla,

You've overlooked one tiny thing from your final description: the word "extra" in front of it....

Nicely written...

Peace and (((Hugs)))

B

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Most UNordinary....but excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Good write, Karla. Nothing "ordinary about this one or you.
Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Like everyone said you are far from ordinary, with your talent!

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

There is nothing ordinary about you, Karla. Great poem

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

You can be as ordinary or extraordinary as you think of yourself; or you can think of yourself as a special child of God's.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Wonderful! Of course, anyone who reads this knows that you are depicting someone else...you are anything but ordinary!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

This is beautiful, Karla and written with the words of the sage poet that you are. We all have the power to feel as big or as small as we deem our self to be. Excellent poem!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

i believe everyone experiences those moments in their life...this poem is a beautiful expression of it..but i wouldn't want to live it very often...nothing wrong with being ordinary, only the thought that it is not enough...

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

An "ordinary" is also a book of prayers and meditations. This would be well suited to inclusion.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

"A flea on a purebred's ass." As Jack Benny use to say, "I'm thinking. I'm thinking!" - and when I finish thinking, Karla, the verdict will be, "You're a crown on the King's brain!" This one is truly a good'un! You do what I wish I could make myself do - and I continue to take essons from you. - B ill

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Reflection, reflection, reflection, why doest thou hover o'er me? Good poem, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Karla honey if you're ordinary then I'll have to go back to school to learn what the word means. This is top-drawer (and deep down you know it;-) Fine writing!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Oh Lady of the Light you are so far from ordinary that you should do another biographical poem of yourself titled as T>Kei suggests Extra-ordinary.

Felix

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Kool message.

DO IT NOW NOW NOW..