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Miracle in the Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Daddy back in hospital; he has a collapsed lung, pneumonia (AGAIN), an irregular heartbeat and low blood pressure. He's awake and aware, feeling good despite the latest setback. PLEASE cover him in prayer. Thank you.

This poem came to me while watching the saddening news about the devastating storms in the south and midwest. God be with those poor people.

I wrote this as a reporter would; I chose to look at the tiny miracles in the storms instead of focusing on all of the incredible distruction.


Poem Artwork

...Survivors wander the ruined landscape;
in shock, they look at the remainders
of familiar comforts, now scattered and
broken; they pick through the pieces,
heartsick at their loss, grateful they're alive.
...A sudden cry pierces the rain filled night;
flashlights answer the summons; it is
a mother, holding her daughter's doll; mud
covered, it survived; a little girl
will be reunited with her best friend.
...In another part of town, parents look
in wonder at the tree resting on
the bed where their boy had been sleeping; their
son had been awakened by the wind;
he went into Mommy and Daddy's room.
...Under a fallen house, a tiny meow
shivers through the air; a mama cat
and her six kittens took refuge in the
basement; they are wet and scared, but are
safe; seven more miracles in the storm.
...And Gramma will have her loving Poppy
to share the rest of her days with; he
slept through the worst of the storm; his hearing
aids still on the nightstand; Gramma said
Pop's snores were louder than the tornado!

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

  

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 Reviews of "Miracle in the Storm"
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Beautiful penned. We are very sorry to hear that your Dad is back in the hospital. We will keep him and you and Karen in our prayers. We wish him a speedy recovery!
Love and many hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Well written Karla!!

You are in my prayers sis!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Excellent writing Karla, on of those tornados touch down here in Indiana, just seven miles from where I live...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Interesting write Karla and yes it is good to believe in miracles when all else seems at a loss. Hope your Dad is doing better and my thoughts are with you.

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Wonderful, heartfelt words about the devestation which has occured in the last two days. Sorry to hear about you dad, prayers on the way

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

Outstanding clear picture in the "Miracle in the Storm". This composition is grand one in contents and art.

Best to You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Great reporter style, Karla! Tells the devastating story with a hint of humor. Hope your dad gets well soon. Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Karla,
This is absolutely fabulous! You did an inspiring job with this! Your father is in my prayers. God bless you all.

Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Karla this is fantastic work! It couldn't be done as well by a news reporter on the scene....I read above about your dad, and I'll put him on the prayer boards again, and keep him in prayer. He sure has had more than his share. You and Karen in prayers too, sending healing energy your way for strength and patience, to go through this trial, along with the storms of spring.Always something, huh?!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Dear Heart,
I have heard about the storms in Texas and as I said to your sister, you and her are in my prayers. I am a reporter and I was astouded by how you did describe this as I would in a feature story. This is full of life and realism. Well done!

Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Beautiful write and I am praying for a miracle on behalf of you're Daddy
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Karla,

There are miracles happening every day, even in times of chaos, devastation, and confusion. Excellent dramatic write; very well imaged and portrayed. You took us there in the midst of the storms and gave us glimmers of hope instead of focusing on the negativity. That is the hallmark of a truly gifted writer; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Praying hard for daddy; he needs a miracle now....

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
This is a wonderful folk way of showing us lucky ones that despite the terror that the media shows...people find thw happiness in the smaller details of their lives. God is good!
I will pray for you, your sister, family and dear father.
blessings for you all!
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Karla
There are 27 dead in this devastating series of twisters across Tennessee, Indiana, Arkansas, Illinois...
The sirens haver been going off everywhere...:)
Pray for the repose of their souls..
I will pray for your Dad too...
Love and Blessings
Peter


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