Assassin (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Nature is boss whether we like it or not. Nicely done, Karla. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Nature can appear quite cruel at times, which you have demonstrated quite well in this write.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

You paint a picture of the power and changing moods of storms, Karla...excellent writing.
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

When it is our turn,
she will exact her
revenge; she is a
lethal assassin.

She truly can be, but perhaps we are not 'unwilling victims;' perhaps our modern day atrocities against her have now riled her to the point where only revenge is on her mind. Quite a frightening thought.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Excellent write!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Mother Nature as a killer...true but seldom thought about as an assassin, good write and works well.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Superb metaphor Karla, in light of recent events I'd say you got this one nailed.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Outstanding write!!

You do know how to spin up great weather poems :)

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Yes! Mother Nature put on her black dress of vortex weave and marched all across the southeast lower part of our country. She sure knows how to keep us on our toes although some of us don't want to dance.
I admire your emotional prose about the weather. We all are victims at one time or the other.
Love nd peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Powerful write as usual, you have a great way with the pen
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

COOL! This is menacing and threatening.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

"she will exact her / revenge;" ?? Revenge? Nature can think and plot revenge? News to me.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Karla~

Wonderful write of the bitch in action; deadly accurate description! DANG! LOL If I have nightmares tonight....LOL Thanks. LOL Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Karla
This is one wicked, son of a bitch assassin...:)
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Hit the nail right on the head with this one. Wonderful write. Excellent and insightful.

Hugs, Trish

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Excellent, Karla! your vivid assessment is original and right on the mark. Just last Sunday a tornado - for eight deadly minutes - struck in a neigboring town. It's one assassin who doesn't miss a target.

Great image.
Gina