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Dog Tag
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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i.

History is being lost:  those that fought
for the stars & stripes are dying in record
numbers.  No Wall records their memories,
no memorial lists their names:  only yellowed
bits & pieces of stories remain, passed down
from father to daughter.

ii.

I remember Daddy talking about the war, but
can't remember what he said.

iii.

I asked him, Are we related to anyone famous?
He said, Your Uncle Duke was a survivor of the
Bataan Death March.  There's your hero.  Uncle
Andrew (we called him Duke) was a POW for
1,224 days.  When liberated, he weighed eighty
two pounds (on a six foot two inch frame).

iv.

How I was to know?  He never talked about it.

v.

Fragments of tales told of battles on the ground
& in the air float in the fog of my mind.  Part of
the puzzle is missing:  why won't it come together?
It's as if their history stopped with me & it shames
that I've forgotten.  I wish I had written it down so
their service wasn't in vain.

vi.

I followed in their footsteps, joined the service.

vii.

I've forgotten mine.  No Wall records my memories,
no memorial lists my name:  only yellowed bits &
pieces of stories linger, to be forgotten when I die.
No son to pass what I remember on to; no legacy
to carry on.  Just a dog tag for someone to find
someday & wonder whose it was ...

viii.

... & what it would say if it could talk.


(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (4/6)


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 Reviews of "Dog Tag"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
Deep,courageous, heartfelt words!
Thank you Karla...for serving.
Love and sunshine, CarolHawks

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
Thanks is not enough for those of you who have served. You're right. The least we can do is show respect. You come from a long line of true and brave, Karla. Thank you for sharing this poem & thank you for serving. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on April 11, 2009
YOu defended our freedom and that makes you hero's Karla!
This poem is that! Your hearts reflection on a Great Soldier!

I wish I could say "I Have Dog Tags" and Hold them in my hand and look UP!
That is a moment to be PROUD!
Thank you for all you did/do and the many who have and still follow AFTER YOU!
Many in our family, don't speak - rather keep their memories and friends discreet! Their little secret/treasures!

WRITE ON!
GREAT POEM!
Words and Thoughts will stay in my heart!

Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed on April 10, 2009

Bravo superb definately enjoyed the read
Yes I too have those dog tags and have always felt regardless
just give me my dog tags and the ol' glory and I'll be ok.

Well here you have started to create a wonderful history for your family.

Blessings as always,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on April 8, 2009
This is an excellent poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2009
Those that were there don't talk, and if they do, is to talk of their buddies, the real heroes.
No one likes go picking in their scars trying to remember what's under.

Georg


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
You r topic is one I never thought of, and maybe you can send it to someone you know is a writer and interested in military affairs. It's something that should be looked into. Excellent writing Karla!

ET

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Your uncle Duke's story would have been priceless. I talked to my uncle Ed a year ago. He served in the Air Force from 1940 until he retired a Major 20 years later. He told me the whole time during World War II he never saw action although he was posted in several places in the United States during the war. He was a consultant in Saigon just before he retired. He is still quite lucid although forgetful. He announced to me in a recent e-mail that he is now 90.

I've written my autobiography detailing my wars with my paralysis and other people's perception of liability after paralysis. You should write down those bits and pieces. You'll be surprised at how much you remember once you start writing. There are other relatives in your family who will benefit from reading them.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Just a dog tag for someone to find
someday & wonder whose it was ...

I keep mine in a special place, and if we're lucky, someone, someday, may remember.

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
I sit in awe at your words. Well done

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
this is one of your finest--a touching, human write-well done!

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Karla your words are going to speak for generations to come, and the stories that seem forgotten will one day come to light, I am reminded of my uncle and his silence about Vietnam and both of My Grandfathers in World War Two
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Oh no, there is no shame. One cannot remember all the stories that have been handed down. I found through the years that most do not want to talk about the horrors they saw and some endured. My grandfather, WWI veteran spoke very little, yet I could see the pain in his eyes. My father too was the same way and I have never been able to even find out which battle ship he was assigned to. My first husband is a Viet Nam Veteran and never uttered a word of what he endured or saw. Robert's father is the same way. Even when asked, he just turns away, like he does not want to remember, yet he cannot forget. You, through your writing do justice to all. No words never need to be spoken to be honored for such a sacriice....



Be always safe,

Karen

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Karla, your words pierce my heart! God bless those who serve, and those who have served, to protect our country!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Quite the story Karla. God bless.

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

Karla, they have a monument here in Capas Tarlac, for those in the death march at Bataan - and their names are written on the wall and in the hearts of our countrymen. We salute you all as soldiers of the world! Great title - dog tags. Greater poem.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Sad,,,there are still so many things I want to ask my Mom...Uncles...Aunts...yes. history does get lost.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Another wonderful write Karla.

With Love,
'Cindy

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
the stories are endless Karla -- and most will unfortunately be lost to history -- but history will also note that the the soul of America is the countless number of brave men and women hat sacrificed their all to defend freedom's call -- Happy Easter -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
This is powerfully penned, Karla.
Now that my mom is gone, I realize there were so many stories that I wished I had written down...so much information that I wish I still had, to pass down & to utilize...



Cryssa

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Karla, history is not being lost as long as there are those who care, as you do. God bless our veterans and men and women in service, and God bless you! Side note...very interesting style on this one

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Thanks, Karla, for sharing these thoughts. Very powerful!

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Karla -- yes it is such a shame that history is being lost ... down scraps of paper. One of my passions is family history and genealogy. Unfortunately, this passion did not strike me until after my grandparents, dad and three of his brothers passed. But I've managed to search and find some interesting records. Have you ever done a genealogy search on your uncle? If not, I'd be willing to try -- ancestry.com does have some military records on file -- my library subscribes so I can do it at no cost -- and I'd feel as if I was giving tribute to one of your heroes. Contact me at swilliams1200.comcast.net if I can help.

It is such a shame that veterans are being forgotten -- we've lived in peace (despite the fighting we have been involved in) ... but peace in that most people do not know anyone who is currently serving in the military. So these soldiers are taken for granted and so are their sacrifices. Susan Williams

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
I agree with Richard completely so don't need to write it again, but remember this, heroes may go unnoticed and trampled under foot here, but in the everlasting Kingdom your reward will be noted and lauded for all to know. It was never in vain. Bless you, J'nia

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
So many memories are resting with those that have gone on, how sad they were never recorded...history lost...well writen Karla
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Every thought you've had, and every word you've ever spoken, or written, has been recorded in an everlasting library. Someday those vast books will be opened and we will all give an account of our days on this planet. You, and what you've accomplished, dear Karla, will never be forgotten.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
I still got mine, dog tag that is...but what good it is, besides memories I don't want to remember is beyond me...Ed

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Karla,

This hits very hard for people that are now studying their genealogy. I so wished I had listened to my grandparents and the stories they told, but I was a child and didn't care. I have stories gathered from cousins and some old pictures I have from Mom, but the missing puzzle, will it ever be as one?

Mary

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
We can hope that the memories linger in the hearts of a few.
Thanks for this, Karla. -gene.

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
God bless our veterans, and let's give ALL of them the honor and respect they're due! EXCELLENT write, Karla, and thank YOU for YOUR service to our country! God bless you! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *SALUTE*

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Hi Karla, this is one of the best tributes I've read for those that gave all, including those vets that earned more than they receive! Outstanding and strong write....

In Spirit,
Bear


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