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This Is A Drill. This Is Only A Drill ...
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Been happening for several days,
bad weather:  the air, overhead,
very unstable, primed to explode:
finally does, this morning with the
arrival of two tornadoes.  One
tears through the high school; 
that one bad enough; the second
waits, gathering F-5 strength,
before shredding a neighborhood
nearby.  Police/fire/EMTs/city
personnel stretched to the limits
of patience; sounds of sirens and
pain cut through the debris and
fears of another storm coming.  I
don't see or hear anything:  I am
unconscious, a victim of the wind
- red tagged for quick transport
to the hospital.  Karen fares better
than me:  walking wounded.  It's a
scene no one wants to imagine
but must be planned for, this full-
scale disaster drill happening today.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (6/24)


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 Reviews of "This Is A Drill. This Is Only A Drill ..."
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
Oh! I can breath again... I forgot it was only a drill! :~) I really wondered why I hadn't heard about an F5 tornado in the news! hee, hee...
OOPS! I guess I can blame it all on your imagery. :~)
Hugs,
Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
Many more of these drills are needed to prpare us for whats ahead! I fear for our future. Glad you and Karen cmae out of it ok!.......M

Reviewed on June 26, 2009
The drill sounds bad enough to me
I would hate to go through the real thing
I'll take the cold here in Canada any day
Great write
The Buzzard

Reviewed on June 25, 2009
I remember disaster drills when I was in the military. I had just come off a 12 hour night-shift, and said, "What the hell, I'll just be dead." I went to bed.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
This drill sounds horrible Karla, but as others have said, at least it was a drill...this time. Be well, (HUGS) HOLLY

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
great descriptive write Karla!...ET

Reviewed on June 25, 2009
KARLA -

I'm with MATLACK - Why would anyone prefer to live in "Tornado Alley"?

Just like the Mudslides, Fires, and Earthquakes in Mexifornia - and the Hurricanes in Florida and the Carolinas - EVEN IF BORN THERE - I WOULD MOVE!

Here in BAWLMER, MERLYN - seems like our Chesapeake Bay on the East - is a SHIELD, or Protector - on the West, the Allegheny Mountains do a stalwart job of cutting down on storms.

Granted - we do have HUMIDITY here - but I'll take that anyday over Mom Nature's other catastrophes ...

TomKat ...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
One good thing...at least it was only a drill!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Been watching the weather stories on the news. I thought of you two. Stay safe! Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Aren't drills those to make holes?
Now, what about going to Fiji until the storm season takes a hike?

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
You sure it was only a drill????

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
You described this so well. Sounds kinda scarey. Good thing it is only a drill, right?

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
With the job I had, we had mock desaster drills several times a year to keep all Emergency personal at peak preformances...good writing, Karla

Carole~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
wow--very scary!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
Sounds like you had quite the experience and came a way with a better understanding and appreciation of how much the Emg. Crews do.

Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
Great job on both counts, Karla. The drill and this write. God bless.

Reviewed on June 24, 2009
Glad it was only a drill; hope we never experience something like this in real life! Only thing is, they could have held it in October; would have been a lot cooler! LOL Very well penned; glad we both survived to live to tell the tale! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
DAMN, I read the poem without looking at the title and it scared hell out of me...you guys have got to get out of Texas...although a red tag is usually alot less expensive at most stores...stay safe, Ed


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