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Sometimes, Life Isn't Fair ...
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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My friend, JZathey, lost her beloved kitty, MicMac, on September 24. Yesterday evening, her beloved Shetland Sheepdog, lay down and went to sleep. Cancer claimed both of them.

'Sometimes, life isn't fair. ..."

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Sometimes, life isn't fair.
You get attached to a
cat or dog, but just not
any old cat or dog -
they become family.

And it hurts when they go
to their eternal rest:

MicMac, three weeks ago.
Mickey was a chatty
Maine Coon with a lot of
"purr"sonality; he
was a star on You Tube.

Dar, yesterday evening.
Sweet Dar, a deaf Shetland
Sheepdog, the old sage in
a furry body, the
calm when all went awry.

You live in memory
and won't be forgotten.

Your Mommie and all who
loved you, because you loved
us first, will make sure of
that.  Wait for us at the
Rainbow Bridge.  We'll be there ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (10/22)


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 Reviews of "Sometimes, Life Isn't Fair ..."
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
A fitting tribute, Karla. Well done.

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on October 25, 2009
never say goodby say i remember you

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
A heart touching and lovely tribute to furry friends, who will be missed...well done.
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
Awe, what a lovely tribute to some very special friends. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
a lovely tribute to both these pets as well as to all who have loved and lost our animal friends

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
I can so relate...love the way you ended this :)

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
This is a beautiful and touching poem.Its always hard for anyone to loose a pet because a pet gives everything that even a family or a friend can't give which is loyality,support and unconditional love.Take care

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
That is so hard when you lose one pet- but to lose two!!I am so sorry for your friend. I will keep her in my prayers.Is your friend a man or woman?

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
So many years ago, and yet, I never could force my self to have another dog, I don't need an extra pain in my life with yet another lost.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Karla, your last words....about The Rainbow Bridge...so beautiful. It's so sad when we lose a pet, because they are so very much like family.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Two in such short order is terrible. I hope they will adopt as soon as they feel they can. It is so hard. Patrick

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Beautiful poetry, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Lovely indeed and I am sure your friend will draw comfort from the soothing words you wrote in this verse.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Like Amber, I love the idea of that Rainbow Bridge, Karla. Our dearest feathered-and-furry friends sure tug at our heart-strings oft-times during each and every day and we feel their loss dramatically. I grieve for your friend to have to endure this one after the other. I'm sure this heartfelt tribute will give her strength and comfort, framed alongside her loved-ones' portraits somewhere. You have probably hit the nail on the head when you say the reasons why we love so deeply is because "you loved us first". A great lesson for humanity to learn! Bless you, xx

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
You have to be american to say'Mommie' and you have to be a good writer to lace the poem/article down the page with that feather-lite-light.hand like you do. nice one.

Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Its so sad when we loose someone we love, I am sorry that this has happened twice, in the span of less than a month, your friend is in my prayers
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Yep. I will forever miss The Nipperdawg . . .

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Karla, right on (as usual). We lost Kitty a few years ago
and I still miss her terribly, despite the fact that she
"greets" me at my computer frequently. -gene.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
I've been there, too, and know the pain your words convey. Very well done. Rebecca

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
This is very beautiful Karla, It is hard to lose a pet, I have known this loss two times so far in my life. I think of their beautiful spirits often. Lovely poem.
Blessings to you and your friend...I love the Rainbow Bridge line.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Karla, this is written with such sweet honesty and caring.

Cheers and peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
This is so beautiful and moving. I have two dogs myself (miniature dachshunds) named Sammy (a rescue) and Claudius (Roman Emperor--acts like it too!). When they go, I will be a mess. I dread that day like you can't believe. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Yes, they are family. Very sad indeed, Karla.

Reviewed by Robert Killey (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
I feel J's pain, we lost 2 lovely animals a few years ago in the space of 4 days,was one of my longest weeks.......RIP Mindy and Jess

Reviewed on October 22, 2009
Karla~

MicMac and Dar will never be forgotten, not if I can help it! So sad: two pets in three weeks; I cannot imagine the pain JZathey must be going through! Heartfelt tribute to a beloved dog; he will live on in this poem (as will MicMac)! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *tears!*

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
beautiful poetry that goes hand in hand with that stunning photo...
Hugs,

Cryssa

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on October 22, 2009
So sorry for your friend's loss. I have been there--God help her heal.


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