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b.Lack and Blue Friday
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... Could have waited, but colds wait for no one. Twin sister sick. ....

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Why do I torture myself?  Going out on
the busiest shopping day of the year --
idiot.  Could have waited, but colds wait
for no one.  Twin sister sick.  Needed

relief; Kleenex and antibacterial sanitizer
was on sale.  Watched happy shoppers
be anything but:  fighting, shoving while
yelling at top of their lungs, 'Hey, that's

mine.'  (Didn't matter you had two of the
must have items in your cart.)  Did you
ever stop to think there will be those who
won't be having a Merry Christmas this

year while you beat the rest of us b.Lack
and blue with your selfishness?  Have the
bruises to prove it.  Guess their happiness
comes first.  Least I still have money left!

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (11/27)


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 Reviews of "b.Lack and Blue Friday"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 15, 2009
"b.lack" Friday is a cross between mayhem and purgatory from my experience -- I went with my wife once, long ago now -- I have not repeated that trick since -- my wife and I were at home this past b.lack Friday -- away from the madness and self centered shoppers you describe in your poem Karla -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- I hope sis is back to normal -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
Yes, it is mayhem at its worst isn't it? Greed takes over when the masses try to grab the same silly stuff which all ends up in landfill one day anyway. Well said. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
I like this. So true.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Well said, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
I always avoid those Black and Blue Fridays, at all cost. And I hope your Twink feels better soon.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
Why is it that the best time of the year takes out the worst out of the people...and their jabbing elbows!

Georg


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
What a sister Karla,,,,hope you get better Karen :) not a good day to tackle those shoppers
love
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Well said, Karla, well said!
Hope Karen is feeling better.

John

Reviewed on November 27, 2009
I stayed home today, didnt want to chance the madness, I could find better things to do with my time and money,hope Karen gets feeling better...
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
I stayed home for that exact reason. Plus if you charge it it'll cost you 88% interest as our buddies at Visa and Mastercard change the rules of engagement. Patrick

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
This is more like a diary piece. If it is..can we please see more pages? lol
Steve Chering. from the Mother Country/

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Best to order everything online ahead of time. I hate this time of year out in public! Great reminder why.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Stupidest damn thing in the world people lined up for hours in cold weather to save a few bucks. Jeez. Hope sis gets well soon . . . jpb

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
"I Me Mine," the mantra of Western Civilization. (Hope Karen gets well soon.) Glad you escaped without further damange to your soul or your wallet!
Hugs

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Well I have heard us Northeners referred to as Crazy Canucks but when I watch the news about your kamakazee shoppers on your Black Friday...think I'll stay up here and be crazy,...lol
fee

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Glad I'm at work today.
I don't have a sister, but I'd pick you.
:)

John

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Great poem.I stayed home. I'm not much of one for crowds. Enjoyed reading thie Karla.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed on November 27, 2009
Glad I stayed home, even though I have a perfectly good excuse: I'm sick! LOL Otherwise I would have come with you! Sad when people's greed takes over the true meaning of the Christmas season ... then they wonder why people act like a Grinch. Powerfully penned madness; well done, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
today is a good day to stay at home

and strategize for the rest of shopping days

before Christmas.....

Love & Peace be with you



William



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