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The Coming Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Don't look behind, for They
may be following.  They
already know every move
you make, where you've
been, who you're with ---
trust no one.  Could be one
of Them.  They march to
different orders.  They only
say what They want you to
know as TRUTH --- what we
knew as Truth is being
ruled unconstitutional, a
pack of lies, according to
Them.  You can feel it heavy
in the air, over land and
over sea:  the coming storm.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (7/17) 


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Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
The rattle of muskets at Lexington grows louder with each passing day. Long ago, yet near and once again clear. Liberty is under overt attack each day. May you know joy peace and love always my dear friend, Karla. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2010
Dear Karla,

American's rights under the U.S. Constitution were taken away by something called the "Patriot Act" under the Bush administration. It is true that President Obama has not yet taken the necessary steps to restore the rights of American citizens that were stolen by Bush and I am disappointed by that. President Obama studied and taught Constitutional Law at the University level so I am keeping the faith that he will do the right thing for America by reversing the crimes committed by the Bush administration.

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on July 19, 2010
As a child learning about the truth held captive in the Soviet Union I felt so blessed to live in a land where propaganda and censorship would never happen here. Somehow we let our guard now, and now the storm comes in waves, the worst of it yet to arrive. Have mercy.


Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Karla, wonderfully and brutally short and to the point. Sadly this started before 911, way back when the first ocean liner was attacked and a man in a wheelchair thrown overboard--the terroist who did it now is president of iran. Worse the storm is already here as we have been infiltrated to the point where we will have to once again defend our country or lose it. I hope there are really patriots out there ready and waiting. May God help us all!

Micki

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
And the storm is still coming too. 9/11 was only the beginning. We have small storms here and there, but the real storm is yet to come. I only pray to God that there were no wears so our young people wouldn't be put in harm's way. This is without doubt Karla, the most esoteric poem I have read to date about what is coming. But when it comes, will we be ready, or will we just go on with our lives, not caring one way or the other.

This war is in Iraq, not here, so what do I care. Well, I care, and I will not just sit by if they tell me the storm has hit our shores.

You did good Karla this was written with a lot of thought. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
scary!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Well written indeed...stay safe and well sweet lady..Hugss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Karla, you've left your readers with much to think about.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
This is the high-tech surveillance grid they're installing to watch our every move. They told us it was about terrorism, al Qaeda, people over there. Nonsense! Headfake. It's about exactly what's unfolding now. When they come to rob you blind, bankrupt the economy, destroy your life and usher in the new era of post-industrial, post-democratic, oligarchical collectivism, they know there will be an uprising. They've covered their bases. This the 21st century scientific dictatorship. They will get all their pieces in place and drop the hammer of full-bore tyranny on our heads with the next orchestrated crisis. And every crisis is orchestrated. Another beauty Karla. You're hitting the message out of the park. Keep waking people up one mind at a time.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Kinda scary if ya think about it...? e

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Ooh Very well written, this is chilling ~ and the sky is volatile!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Remember the snake in The Jungle Book, how it would seduce, or try to seduce, its prey? Your poem reminded me of it, without the childhood innocence. Very well penned. Rebecca

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Very well done with lots to think about...
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Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Well done, Karla.

Reviewed on July 17, 2010
It is time we, as Americans, as believers, realize our freedoms and rights are being taken away. Time we stand up, united, and say: "NO MORE! Enough is ENOUGH!" Very well penned/illustrated; a powerful and necessary write! And that piccy: chilling but beautifully effective for this poem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Some may think you a fear-monger, but eyes need to be opened. God is still on the throne and there are still those who speak the truth boldly.
Let us all make the effort to look behind the facade and discern the truth by God's grace.
A timely warning.
Hugs,
Connie


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