Utterance & ejaculation (poem) by Ted Bossis on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Were my face the sun it would be beaming at you right now, Ted! :)) Ah yes... timing... intentions are so very often thwarted by the sudden arrival - whether too early or too late - which is beyond our control. But the manifestation of the journey and the utterances along the way ensure at least a few earth tremors to catalyse the spontaneity of survival. Great multi-layering of thoughts and meaning here. Love, Kate xx :))

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

A beginning, new life abounds each time a new star is born, unexpected but by deliberate design! Just beautiful....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Ted, spontaneity is of utmost importance to all mankind, without it many of us would be sitting idle and sheer couch potatoes. Interesting and causes one to stop & think!

Reviewed by William Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Indeed. Such are things, lol

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

This one takes the mind on an "explosive" journey through that most illusive "valley of stellar shadows" which all men seek.

Nicely done.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Oh my,yesssss.... shoot for the stars sweet man,love this...Hugsss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Shoot baby...knock them down...and breath....let it flow JO.....and shoot for the stars!!

Very "ejaculative" offering...TedSO!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

This burst of openess is the gift of exploring the possible. It always takes a small explosion of energy to get anywhere first.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Manifesting what you truly believe or desire, will bring about change and fulfillment..
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

The human mind is a strange thing, but your write is not; it's quite different, enjoyed, Holly

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Ted,
You might say they have a one track mind.....
Enjoyed
Best regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Ted,

I guess you could also call this, "Shooting for the Stars."
You've reached an apex with this one my friend.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

"Utterance & ejaculation"
Now Ted I must admit this is some combo...guess it would go hand in glove to a certain extent. "*Wilful intentions ambitiously discernible *" I had to giggle at this one.

Blessings as always,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Oh but when it arrives it is wet and wild! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

I like this one Ted.
I can just see them little buggers headed for their ultimate goal.
But only one out of a million will make it. I guess it's kind of like winning the lottery for them.

Walt