Blue Pill (Tanka) (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 15, 2008

ooh ,I don't believe I need a man no more. Happy with the one that did and left me with his spirit. Goo write here but not thank you, no one needed now for me that has to use this blue pill.

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

BECCA - well done! As an ole fart of 67, one of the young whippersnappers on my pool team constantly teases me about using VIAGRA -

in the very wise words of Jiminy Cricket from an old Disney film ...

"It ain't what you got, but how you use it!"

my motto has always been - if you ain't SATISFIED - then I ain't DONE!

:) :) :) TomKat ...

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

while this made me laugh, it also contains some hard truth...no pun intended...not only the proliferation of junk mail, but also the misunderstandings associated with the drug...the main one being...a pill will NOT satisfy passion. Excellent piece here, both in composition and in the form.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

I pass on this one
A Really "Kool" Write Becca
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

I am still searching for a response. ????? You thought provoker, you!
Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Becs,
You take half of one and see what happens...I aint gonna tell...

Wally

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

But the side effects can be deadly!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Becca,

Your such a card.(lol)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

LOLOLOL...Bloody spam... I use Viagra and put it in my eyes, just to make me "look harder" lol

Oh my you get these too... I thought the ones about the **** enlarger, my ex had been giving secrets away.... Never click on the sites, they prolly have all sorts of CPU harm.ware..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Too funny;-) you tell them Becca!

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Is it not amazing what will inspire a poem? and perhaps more amazing still when we have the sight to see it!

Great job!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Can certainly do without all the junk mail, does get tiring, over and over and over again... Nice way to express the stupidity of it all....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

whoa!!Cute and clever!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Cute Rebecca, but some gotta watch the heart ya know. lol, you just made my night, love holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Hmnnn gotta love it, take two pills with somthing to eat...hmmnnn now what can I eat? lol

Fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Laughing too hard to review - you, too? Do you get those ones advertising how to increase the size of your penis? HeLLO, I'm female!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't have one of those. Spam mail - GRRRRRRR Or I've won the lottery - that's nice, but how can I win if I NEVER PLAYED???????? *hopping off my soapbox* Thanks for letting me vent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Good one. Didn't have it in my day.

Reviewed by Paula Gomez (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

LOL funny poem.