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Did I Touch Your Heart?
by Bernice Angoh → (All Poetry by Bernice Angoh)
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My Daughter says the most amazing things, sometimes without even realizing the depth of them....



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She looked at her belly button
and marvelled at the connection
a cord? from here to there?
then she touched mine
still wondering how that could be
I told her of all the adventures
we shared, all things good ofcourse
but being the incredible person she is
she had to top it with the most important question
"Mommy, while I was inside of You
did I touch your heart?"
Not realizing the depth of her words
and with tears in my eyes I solemnly replied
"Yes, yes, you did, more than you can ever know"

 Copyright © 2009 Bernice Angoh

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Did I Touch Your Heart?"
Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on July 28, 2009
What a profound question by a young child!

Her question has certainly touched my heart.

Richard

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Bernice I love your heart and gift of writing. This is priceless.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Awesome the way you captured the depth of the love a mother develops while carrying a baby. Liz

Reviewed on March 7, 2009
WOW! May her light shine bright daily! for all to know, see and feel!
Nina! OUT OF THE MOUTH OF BABES!
Pregnacy was such eloquent beauty, inside and out, I always felt!
ART of the finest!
I love your Mother and daughter picture, and not leaving out rose petals on the keyboard, exqusite, words of praise and love! Love being 1st.!
Like Mother like daughter, honesty of the heart and soul!
WRITE ON!

Warmest of Blessings and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed on March 5, 2009
Sweet Pic Bernice!!
& She Is No Doubt A Poetess at Heart!!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie

Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2009
Bernice,
Sounds like a Nina comment. She, in her innocent beauty, lights the path.
Love,
Auntie

Reviewed by Lyn Dano (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Children have such precious insight. Thank you so much for sharing this, Bernice. I really needed this today - Lyn

Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Hello Bernice,

Beautiful poem. Very simple but deeply profound.

Cynthia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
How beautiful,and so filled with the spirit that connects you both!
Thank you for sharing this inspired poem,Bernice!

ps I will send info later, I just saw the message, it didn't show up in my email.Sorry!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Wow! She is one amazing little girl, but then you, Bernice are an amazing woman. Beautiful poem.

ann

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Bernice,
Gorgeous evocation...out of the mouths of babes...and a splendid photograph to accompany such excellent thoughts and expression.
John

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
I am touched in my heart from this warming write. Such a beautiful question from a beautiful little angel!

Reviewed by Anna Glymph
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Awe I love this thanks for sharing.....

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Yes.... you touched my heart too! I love this, and I can only imagine how emotional this lovely little question must have meant to you! Like mom...like child... beautiful! hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
WOW! you mothers have all the fun...and the pain, I guess, but no father will ever be asked, "before I was born, I touched your heart?" without knowing that they did.
A marvelous one from a marvelous little one!

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
This is soooo precious and you should really submit it to magazines ASAP for it is perfect for Mother's Day. Well done and you are two very pretty ladies.

Fee

Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Yes, she did, as you've touched hers - a wise soul encased in the body and mind of a child: congratulations, Bernice. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Beautiful Bernice. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Out of the mouths of babes wonderful things emerge. God bless both of you.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
'Did I touch your heart?'--------VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Bernice,

Out of the mouths of babes, comes so much wisdom. Your daughter seems like an amazing little girl as is her Mom. That last line bought tears to my eyes.

Mary

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
Yes! And she continues to do so...
What a special little girl she is.

Cryssa

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
An outstanding beautifully written Piece
I am also amazied at the questions that sometimes
My granddaughter ask anf she's only 4
Love & Peace be with you

William


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