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The Vow
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He said 'Forever', I said 'And ever'

in the alter of our hearts, we stood

No one to object, no audience except God

we didn't need to rethink, we didn't need ink

it was saved on time's paper that no one can find nor tear

for wedding bands his arms formed his ring around me

and mine around him

our first dance, the music we made

our sickness, our health

our better, our worse

and then I died in his kiss and he died in mine

but even in death we did not part.

 

Copyright (c) 2012 Bernice Angoh

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Vow"
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on August 14, 2013
Perfect... ok, Ok, I admit it, I think I'm becoming a fan.
thank you for sharing this, it really is lovely.
Steve

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 7, 2013
He said 'Forever', I said 'And ever'

Yes, this is needed in today's society.

Peace, love and blessings from the Lord,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 25, 2013
it's the final two lines that do it for me,
this eternal passion, this commitment,
this LOVE

wonderfully delivered, Bernice,

john

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 10, 2012
It is true that a kiss can symbolize so much. Thank you, Bernice. There is a "typo" in your first verse. I think you meant to write, "forever." Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2012
Bernice,
I really do feel another book emerging. This is beautiful.
xoxoxox

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 9, 2012
a rebirth in that kiss i can see and feel in how well you penned this
budd


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