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come together
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these two have been hanging around our back hillside making quite a scene...the poem tells the story


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he’d been hangin around the past few days
pacing and panting looking insane
he’d run up the hillside
and bound through the leaves
his tongue hanging out
his eyes looking glazed
he had one mission driving him on
focused, determined… to mate on the lawn
 
she’d feigned her interest time after time
looking away and side stepping with yawns
her big doe eyes were not quite there
as she nibbled the leaves and didn’t care
 
he rutted and hoofed shaking his head
come on baby… let’s mate instead
maybe later… her eyes seemed to say
come around later some other day
 
well, somethin’ happened this very morn
as i looked out the window sometime after dawn
there they were… laying quiet on the hill
while everything around them
seemed perfectly still
at ease, at peace, and looking contented
in nature, these lovers… had blissfully connected
 

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "come together"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
Lovely natural sentiments, Debby. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
A little piece of heaven right here on earth . Deer are one of my favorite animals......M

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Beautiful!!!
must be nice.....

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Love it, Debby.
What a neat view you have!

Elizabeth

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
this is one of better nature pieces I have seen in quite a while.
It also can be read as a metaphor or analoghy for the human situation.
Well done, my friend.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Awww this is lovely....love....always beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 16, 2006

An outstanding depicting of Nature's harmony in "come together" stimulates respect to Mother Nature... "come together" brings the aroma of wisdom.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Nature is marvelous, as is this poem, Debby.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
It is ironic that we humans think that we are really the only ones capable of love and not just lust but yet as your the picture your poem paints shows and as I have seen in nature over the years, I think animals can love and care and be totally devoted to each other.

Fee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
wonderful nature poem, Debby ... nice to be so close to nature ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
I love how you told this Debby! It's such a wonderful nature story/poem! You are blessed to see it up close and personal;-)
Great stuff!

Eileen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
He Smoked a cigarett before you noticed them....
Just joking ....Debby
This is a great nature write
enjoyed reading it very much
Thank you for sharing
peace be with you

William


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