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Mack & Lill
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Mack & Lill Is My Version of The New Millennium "Jack & Jill" Nursery Rhyme ;)

Photography Artist: http://plastikstars.deviantart.com *Mack & Lill* Mack and Lill took a pill To see what would come after Mack got high and touched Lill’s thigh As Lill was high with laughter Mack got mad and looked at Lill Then tried again to touch her Thou Lill was high she did sigh I would much rather have your sister (Written: February 2^nd, 2008 10:01 a/m) Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley *In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love* Embraced ~Embrassé

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Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 26, 2010

THE RHYME SCHEME IN THIS WORK IS DONE WELL...POETESS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2009

Vickie, You could do a book of adult nursery rhymes. . .
Deb

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2008

YES!! Great! I love how you can write something so deep and then write something so delightfully humourous! I think this truly reflects your playful side :) I really enjoyed reading this, and the pic made it a blast!

I felt naughty reading this :) LOL

TEE HEE

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

Okay Miss V, keep 'em coming!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

I too like his sister better.

Georg

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

hee hee...Fee...I Like That better!!
So An Edit Has Occurred!!
and now Lill wants his sister-lol
Thank You ;)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

Ahhh poor Mack, but could have taken it one step further and she could have wanted his sister. LOL
Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

I would say you are on a roll. Adult nursery rhymes...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

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