It was a picture postcard, mid-October day
with the feel of Connecticut –
the kind they call Indian Summer.
There was that undeniable, crisp autumn smell in the air
that belongs only to October,
and she shuffled through leaves as she walked,
the warmth of the sun on her shoulders.
She continued down narrow winding roads –
past corn fields and the castle –
the one called Peschiera Borromeo,
stopping to pet a stray dog on the way.
Then strolled through the gates of the old stone inn
where she sat in the garden, sipping hot lemon tea.
And when finished, she retraced her steps,
heading toward home –
with thoughts of her next autumn outing.
Dawn, I'm trying to catch up after my days in hospital. Before writing a word, I discovered that this poem holds a record of sorts on AD. Never before have I seen 30 reviews under a posted poem. Most are not even close, and I cheered recently when I scored 14. We have many readers, but you bring out the commentary! Each of the 30 is justified and well earned. This work is lovely beyond words. I'm so glad that I know you....... and your work. Mitt Luff, -Bill
As much as I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry
Love & peace be with you
William
Axilea
Sandie Angel :o)
nice work Dawn...
Art Sun...
Wonderful poem.
take care,
William
One of your talents is giving a character/voice a "real" feel - as though this is someone you are watching when you write. Nicely penned:)
Sheila
Loved this poem, Dawn,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
perfect in setting and mood with a real autumnal touch and feel to it. What a fine outing you take us on!
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
cruelest, but October is the loveliest month of the year. My only
tour of Europe was in an October too many year ago. You lovely
poem brings it all back to me. Thanks. -gene.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
:)Christine
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Simply beautiful. There's nothing to compare to the beauty of those Indian Summer Days in New England. No matter where one goes or how far from home you travel you'll always have those awesome memories. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.