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Wordless Whispers
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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I lie awake listening

to wordless whispers in

the dark, watching as their

bodies cast languid shadows

on the moonlit wall.

 

I arise, a silent voyeur, moving

closer as they sway in lover’s

dance, once more listening to

wordless whispers of the pines.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Wordless Whispers"
Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on June 29, 2010
Beautiful pic to go with a beautiful poem, isn't everything in nature just so grand!
David

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 19, 2010
I love watching the dance of trees as they sway to the rhythm of nature's music. I love the swish of their branches as well.

Cryssa

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on April 19, 2010
Dawn - You have captured in these few words and images the magic and the mystery of human existence. - David

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
A poem in which I can perfectly picture myself listening to the "wordless whispers of the pines". A life of their own.



Axilea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
An enchanting and captivating offering, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Nice thoughts Dawn...there is so much to absorb from your poem...whether the view of Nature or the grasp of whispers ...we only need to escape into the very silence of both...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
Again, this is what I love about poetry--the ability to convey so much with an economy of words. Well done.
Carol

Reviewed on March 28, 2010
Many wish they were the authors of this poem. Short, succinct and deeply absorbing. Thanks dear Dawn

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on March 24, 2010
What a beautiful sight, Dawn. The play of nature in God's beautiful creations. Your gentle words give life to the stunning photo. Well done! Peace and love in Christ.

Sheri

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 8, 2010
Love the sound, love the look, love the. . .everything!!

Thank you, Dawn !!

xOx 'Pea' xOx

Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
Reviewed on March 5, 2010
Dawn, you paint a beautiful vision with words. It takes me back to the redwood trees I miss so much. Love the photo, too. ~leslie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 5, 2010
Beautiful connection with the pines...I enjoyed this gentle expression

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2010
I love those moments; I love my evergreens and their unique and mystical voice. This speaks to my heart. I am drawn to the "alone.ness" that is made less "lonely" through kinship with the natural world.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 27, 2010
a perfect magical mystery tour... absolutely beautiful, dawn.
be well, poetess,
carolyn

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 27, 2010

Lovely words made more so with skilled writing. Whispers among the pines continue to capture our hearts for all kinds of reasons. This is excellent wringing!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
Beautifully composed Dawn
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
This has lovely visual appeal, Dawn, and also an underlying sadness ... it is beautifully written ~ Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
This is beautiful work dawn. Great stuff!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
Very ethereal and flowing from one phrase to the next. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
OBSERVATION...BRINGS CLARIFICATION; WHAT HE'S DONE FOR OTHERS(EVEN NATURE)...HE'LL DO FOR YOU. WORDS OF CONTENTED HOPE. THANK YOU DAWN...YOU DO GO THERE...BEAUTIFULLY. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
This has such a beautiful, serene flow that takes the rush out of life and restores the peace...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Love the gentle whisper of a breeze through the trees. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Just love how the title flows off the tongue.
And the context is lovely. Night, soft breezes
through the pines, a clear sky, ones heart and mind
attune to wisdom and direction ... very soothing.
Blessings ...
richard

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
What a beautiful image you have created, Dawn. This is soothing and warm.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
I love to take a walk amongst pine trees and savor the sweetness of their scent. Your poem took me for such delightful walk.

George C.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
I am fortunate that from my desk at work I see snow covered pines.
Quite the winter wonderland today.
This is really beautiful.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
The beauty of whispering pines...this is stunning Dawn!
Christine~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
saoft and lovely, a beautiful write

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Beautiful, Dawn, I love your photo!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Just beautiful, Dawn. I'm glad to see you post a poem. It's even more impressive to know this poem comes out of a transitional period for you. Stress crushes my creativity. This poem reminds me of my poem By Candles' Light. In it, two flames dance, and I'd seen that part vividly when writing it. I saw your dancing shadows just as vividly, and there is a slight sense of eerie to this piece, too. Awesome work!
Sheila

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
This is almost breathlessly in its scope, Dawn. Funny you should incorporate pines in your poem. I wrote one yesterday which has "a bed of pine straw bed." Again, this is pure poetry.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Perfect title, Dawn, as the idea is so central to the theme...and I love the control and the brevity...no need for more.

John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
No worthless whispers there, just ears not in tune with the disturbed silence.

Georg



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