Wonderfully written. The softness of the mood and the imagery exudes the feeling of a warm spring evening. I see you have been reviewed by purists...not an altogether bad thing...reviews should fairly reflect the opinions of the reviewer...but should always be accepted as such...
Beautifully constructed write Silver, though I have to be honest, when I say this, and to anyone else who reviews this particular write, personally I find it hard to review writes of this nature. I have decided to be completely honest here and now, perhaps Mor sparked something within me, but I shall use it in a positive and polite manner. I am a Christian, and as such, cannot get into this kind of fantasy as it goes against my personal grain, nor will you find that I write same.
This is my personal choice, as is yours, and your right to express such a choice. Each to his own.
We all have our beliefs, be they known to us, or unconciously stored away, tis no different. Mine are quite poignant in my writes as are yours Silver, and so one appreciates them as they are written.
If it is for you, then it touches the heart, if not, then best not to remark in any detrimental way or not at all.
I have said at the beginning of your review, for what it is worth, your contruction of the write was beautiful.
Peace and blessings to you
And you are a most beautiful lady if I may say so.
TY Ch'erie
Beautiful words, beautiful picture..enjoyed this very much...best wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
Hi Silver Celtic Moon,
I see you like giving advice to other authors.
Personally, I never give advice, I just observe.
I could not help but notice how you utilise the English language.
Even allowing for the differences between English and American spelling.
There would appear to be a substantial number of spelling mistakes.
(I have the same problem, because I never pre write any poem, I just type straight on the page)
On two occasions your subject and verbs do not match.
Your use of adjectives as end stops, is confusing, there are perfectly good adverbs available to you, that even if they did not enhance the poetic quality of your poem, would at least make it less of an grammatical nonsense.
The first book in the series takes place on Klairn, a post apocalyptic, yet provincial world where an elite core of Protectors keep watch over those who would cause harm. Becoming a Protector of Klairn is about as hard as making the Olympics on Earth
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This is my personal choice, as is yours, and your right to express such a choice. Each to his own.
We all have our beliefs, be they known to us, or unconciously stored away, tis no different. Mine are quite poignant in my writes as are yours Silver, and so one appreciates them as they are written.
If it is for you, then it touches the heart, if not, then best not to remark in any detrimental way or not at all.
I have said at the beginning of your review, for what it is worth, your contruction of the write was beautiful.
Peace and blessings to you
And you are a most beautiful lady if I may say so.
TY Ch'erie
I see you like giving advice to other authors.
Personally, I never give advice, I just observe.
I could not help but notice how you utilise the English language.
Even allowing for the differences between English and American spelling.
There would appear to be a substantial number of spelling mistakes.
(I have the same problem, because I never pre write any poem, I just type straight on the page)
On two occasions your subject and verbs do not match.
Your use of adjectives as end stops, is confusing, there are perfectly good adverbs available to you, that even if they did not enhance the poetic quality of your poem, would at least make it less of an grammatical nonsense.
Definitely one unimpressed Celt.
Oirdheirc Mor
:)Sandy
Vesna
Just a joy to read. Brava!
Reindeer
A wonder land indeed, for sure, right on.
Love Tinka