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Two Left Feet
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I want to, I really do
But I just can’t
I try, I try so hard
But I just can’t
I ache for the chance
I want to, can’t you see
But I just can’t
I sit out every dance
Not cause I want to
Why can’t you tell me
Why I want to so bad
And still I just can’t
Every one else does
I see it every day…
They know how and do it well
I could too, if you show me the way
Please can’t you see
How badly I want to
And how much I just can’t

Is love this hard for everyone?

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 Reviews of "Two Left Feet"
Reviewed by alw
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
This REALLY hits home for me! Nice to read something about something I have thought many times...

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2002
Hi Sue,
I believe it is for the most part. Please read my post today, it speaks on the same subject.
Good question and you know how I like questions! Gregg

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on August 2, 2002
yes
great write - I can feel the emotion

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 2, 2002
If love would have been easy for me when I was young...I never would have learned to appreciate it so much now. Sometimes in love we become our own worst enemies. But eventually we find the magic and submit unrestricted to its power.
Amor

Reviewed on August 2, 2002
GREAT write, sue! TEN PLUS!!! :) the first encounter with love seems to always be the best. after that, it's not as easy...it sucks, actually...unless you get very lucky. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on August 2, 2002
great write sue. love the title...got my attn..but you followed thru well. and yup,
i think after 16, love is kinda rough.
steve


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