The moon can hear. Did you know? No, I mean hear. Glisten must be G plus listen. Let me tell you how I know.
A stubby, between-story roof jutted over the front porch of a house my mother threatened my father with life or death if he didn't agree to buy. The room she assigned to me with the stipulation that things be kept her way provided a portal, as it turned out. The window beside the bed could be nudged into opening with barely a sound so I could squeeze pajamaed skin and bone through when the house grew silent. The roof was half-melted, having been baked by a put-out sun. It dug into my thighs and butt, but it was all that was keeping me from sliding. I was hanging on tight when I got a shock. Pinned to the sky was a circle too big and beautiful to be real. At first, I decided an angel had cut it out of paper she made herself. It wasn't angel colored. More silver with shades of gray. As the summer wore on, gold began to shimmer in unexpected ways. The paper turned to the sad but peacefully waiting face of a woman like none I had known. Talk to me, she crooned. I don't tell. You will feel better, I promise. I was so startled, I almost fell. But I could see I had a friend. Blue when I started to confide, her silver rubbed off. Even a little of her gold.
Do not believe a mere mortal. Climb a ladder if you have to, but get close enough to really look. If you listen, she will. Just be very, very still.
Climb a ladder if you have to, but get close
enough to really look. If you listen,
she will.
Marvelous, Phyllis - and I believe she truly does. This brought back many pleasant childhood memories for me when I would sneak up to our musty old attic with my dog and we would both marvel at her through our tiny window to the galaxy.
Nothing equals the love of fantasy of a child. This would simply be marvelous illustrated and given to your grandchildren, Pea. You should think about doing a small story book for them. It would be one of the most important legacies you could leave to them. "Read me a story, grandma," I can hear them say to you, Pea! Destined to become a fantasy classic collectible from the lovely poetess Pea.
I concur with the board completely Pea !
This is simply enchanting and bewitching, and hurled me back to the innocent days of childhood, and the unimaginable workings of the imagination
I could also vizualize sitting on that roof conducting a private conversation with the Man in the Moon !
Peter
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
enchanting ...reminds me of how important it is to just believe (have printed it out to read to my little girl)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
It sounds like an enjoyable portal too.
Fuel for the imagination.
You had me from the git go and had me entranced by your storytelling poetic ability. I became a kid again, wishing I had been there with you--stunning, magical work. Thank you! Saving this one, oh, yes, to travel when life is getting me down.
Simply magical write here, Phylis, this is one of your best and one of the best I think i have read capturing the soul, heart and imagination of a child's mind. It made me want to be sitting there on that roof with the child looking at the moon and talking to the fairy as well. Great poem and the graphic compliments rather nicely.
This is beautiful and magical. It brought me back to when I was a young girl and believed in wishes and falling stars - I wanted to go back to that place. This is lovely beyond words, I've saved it to read again and again. Thank you for this.
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
A true poetic accomplishment in a "Funny Carpet, Serious Magic".
Thank You for letting the world smell Your poetic flowers.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Loved it.
Gina
enough to really look. If you listen,
she will.
Marvelous, Phyllis - and I believe she truly does. This brought back many pleasant childhood memories for me when I would sneak up to our musty old attic with my dog and we would both marvel at her through our tiny window to the galaxy.
love and peace...Carole
Sage
This is simply enchanting and bewitching, and hurled me back to the innocent days of childhood, and the unimaginable workings of the imagination
I could also vizualize sitting on that roof conducting a private conversation with the Man in the Moon !
Peter
Fuel for the imagination.
Well done.
You had me from the git go and had me entranced by your storytelling poetic ability. I became a kid again, wishing I had been there with you--stunning, magical work. Thank you! Saving this one, oh, yes, to travel when life is getting me down.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Birgit and Roger
Love Tinka
Felix