Shimmering, shining, fixedly twining, sun-silvered and ever so slightly befuddled, the morning glory opens our gifts one at a time. All the time stammering beneath breath scented so it is easy to miss, None is yours to keep, but to feel your eyes touch as they would a butterfly, each petal a stunning blue violet wing that a clenched fist powders like that. Lean close and you will hear, Give us a lullaby, Luv. One for each and every bloom before that shadow creeps to claim. Only one that you create will do. Remember, Luv, neither morning nor glory lasts. Only the music we make. If we are lucky, the memory of a moth soft touch..
I love your use of dual diction here, Pea... so refreshing and surprising... like morning and glory! The combination of voices is very effective. I very much like the classic Romantic flavour to this but given a lemon-squeeze twist to add that extra pizzazz! :)) Kate xx
This whole offering is simply beautiful. One can "feel" the ambiance of the moment and the place. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetic gift, Pea. Love and peace,
"The morning glory opens our gifts one at a time."
What a lovely, lovely thought!!!
The Morning Glory is one of my favorite flowers. I even
featured it on the cover of my first poetry book.
www.annamariefritz.com
I love the morning glory flowers
Oh mother natures is so beautiful
Such a warm and tender tonne and
Excellent imagery and flow
Is so vivid I could almost see the
morning glory opening up!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
A warm and tender write my friend...enjoyed this much...delicate and soft write! Beautiful! Always a pleasure to read your work!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
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peace,
carolyn
ps-many congrats on your book! brava!
Regis
Carmen
What a lovely, lovely thought!!!
The Morning Glory is one of my favorite flowers. I even
featured it on the cover of my first poetry book.
www.annamariefritz.com
Oh mother natures is so beautiful
Such a warm and tender tonne and
Excellent imagery and flow
Is so vivid I could almost see the
morning glory opening up!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
Love tinka
Fee
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Very tender and sweet. Quite a lullaby of words.
Real Glory is reading your words; real glory is YOU!! Another beautiful write, rich with meaning; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
neither morning nor glory lasts.
Only the music we make.
How so very true!