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Little Girl In The Mirror
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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Sometimes the lost children of the world find a home where they are loved and wanted. May the Lord put His loving arms around all our children and give them this special wish...

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Little girl in the mirror
Are you really me
I feel like I’m living out
A real life fantasy
Back an forth to different
Homes since I was four
Mama had left me
She didn’t want me no more

Different faces, different lives
Never was the same
Every home was different
No one was to blame
I just wasn’t happy
Didn’t matter where I’d go
My heart was busy searching
For what I didn’t know

A month ago I moved again
But I dared not hope
If anything I’d learned
To manage and to cope
Slowly I begin to smile
My heart started to melt
Love gently washed away
All the bad feelings I’d felt

Now a smiling face
Is staring back at me
I never knew how beautiful
Life could be
“Mama” gives me hugs and kisses
“Daddy” gives them too
I’m living out a dream
Can this be true

My own room , my own friends
I even like my school
Sometimes I have sleepovers
That is so cool
The little girl in me
Don't hide anymore
Thank you God for giving me
All I had prayed for

Little girl in the mirror
Are you really me
I feel like I’m living out
A real life fantasy

© Linda Hill 2003
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 Reviews of "Little Girl In The Mirror"
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
This is so beautiful and poignant at the same time. I am reminded of a prayer I pray often for the children who roam the streets at night, unloved, unwanted, uncared. It is great that this little girl found a loving home. Great poem. Vicor

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
This lovely poem weighs heavy on my heart, dear Linda.
There was a time I was a Little Boy in the Mirror.
When I found a new life, my own life at fourteen, it was like being born again. Hope and faith is what we have. Life can and does change. And it's a miracle, a real miracle!
Richard

Reviewed on February 10, 2007
Grabs the heart and doesn't let go! A powerful read, Linda; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
It's really amazing what a littls love can do,a beautiful heartfelt write my friend,excellentmessage to others,never give up,hope is around the corner,
God Bless,

Micael

Reviewed on February 10, 2007
This one reaches into the heart and gives it a squeeze: powerfully effective, beautiful verse. Well done, Linda!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
Linda, a beautiful story for sure. Many the hearts of many children just like her be healed in this way. Lady J

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
A soul touching write. Children are our greatest gift giveth of God. Though some can lose all purpose in finding happiness due to circumstances beyond their control. This write expresses a little girl, who truely was given a second chance finding love and happiness in her heart. A beautiful write.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
OH my goodness you've penned an outstanding and very heartwarming realistic poem here my dear friend...you've penned the life of a little girl in my classroom and many other little girls I am sure...I have a little girl in my classroom who is in foster care as I speak, she is adjusting well and lately I've noticed a smile on her face that wasn't there before. The couple whom she is living with goes to church with me and are an upstanding couple with much to give, they are unable to have children. The trio seems to be very happy! You've touched me deeply with this one! All children deserve the opportunity to look in the mirror and see a smiling face! This one is a keeper for me!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 10, 2007
If only all children could find their dreams and wishes. Lovely pen.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
May the Lord put His loving arms around all our children and give them this special wish...

Amen, Linda!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
Linda, this poem really states an overwhelming truth. There are so many poor children out there without homes. I was a foster mother years ago, and can vouch for the truth and sincerity of feelings of what you've written. Great write, my friend.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
Wonderful offering Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 10, 2007

An inspiring writing of emotions heartily poetized.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Little Girl In The Mirror".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Wonderfully sweet Linda...well said

Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Delightful, just delightful.

Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Lina this is beautiful as always, I love your style, thank you for sharing this
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Most Excellently Done...

Your True Friend TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Wish all the little childern could live
this way.....
Enjoyed Linda....

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
Wonderfull story that though it is sad and heartbreaking at the beginning it show us what the power of love and someone to care can do to change a little girls life forever. Well done Linda.

Fee

Reviewed on February 9, 2007
OOOOHHHHHH!!!!! Linda, this is soooooo goooood!!!!! Yes, sometimes things do turn out for the better if we keep our hopes up high!!!!!!

This one has a happy ending, I like this a lot!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
So precious Linda. What a tender heart you have my dear. Your poems are sacrad. Love Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
This write touches the soul of the reader, Linda. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
This touches the heart deeply and I wish this happiness for every child.


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