Dear Dolly, let me hold you tonight
Tell me everything will be allright.
Mama just kissed me and left me here
She never returned - doesn't she care?
On your head Dolly, she had taped a note
No one ever told me what she'd wrote.
Abandonment I heard someone say
As other children went for play.
Dear Dolly, I don't know what to do
At least Mommy let me keep you.
Why did she leave us? I don't understand
I could do housework... I know I can.
All I have now is you Dolly, to hold
I love you with my heart and soul.
Promise me you won't ever leave
Or ever hurt me or deceive.
Dear Dolly, you are now my best friend
We'll be together ' till the end.
I don't know what fate has in store
Just that Mommy don't love me no more.
Some say a new Mommy may take me away
It could be next year..or even today.
I want my real Mommy to come back for me
I'll be so good...Mommy you'll see....
Linda, I see you got one to show up! And a great one it is. The truth in your children's writes are so painful,,but yet so needed to be read. Thanks for sharing,,Lisa
Wonderful write. Great work linda. You have done something great tonite. This is really wonderful.
There are double codes instead of single codes in you write. I think this is the technical problem with the Programmers in AD.
Hope they will sort it out soon.
Hey friends, if anyone finds any problems like this. Pls mail them sometimes our mails can help them in solving their bugs in their program and you authors can have a wonderful and happy family in AD.
This is a wonderful write. Hope you dont mind me pasing this message through this review. I did it bcoz i know the mistake i found in your write is not yours but a programming defect by the programmers in AD.
What would you do if your friend copped off with the man you loved? Wouldn't it break your heart? Abbie is heartbroken when Richard prefers her lovely French pen friend Colette over her.
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Chrissie
Excellent...Very well written realistic write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Jack
There are double codes instead of single codes in you write. I think this is the technical problem with the Programmers in AD.
Hope they will sort it out soon.
Hey friends, if anyone finds any problems like this. Pls mail them sometimes our mails can help them in solving their bugs in their program and you authors can have a wonderful and happy family in AD.
This is a wonderful write. Hope you dont mind me pasing this message through this review. I did it bcoz i know the mistake i found in your write is not yours but a programming defect by the programmers in AD.
~Sanil