Can I Go Home With You? (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 7, 2003

You have the best heart.
Never forget it.
John

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

>tears <

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Very touching but sadly very true for those who live in abusive homes sometimes those children think that thought and only that thought Linda my angel you truly are a sweet angel you did an excellent poem here great job on it

Reviewed by Red Matrix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

A+ once again Lindy!

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Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

wow

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Yip!! this is a superb write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

deeply touching write...

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

We are in the same boat.. you can com home with me.. but be warned it never replaces what you really seek.. Your mother your family.. the one who gave you birth.. Sad but true. You will always have a part of your heart missing.. the part they did not fill. Something we learn to live with..
Good luck and God bless..

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Dear Linda...this is excellent write from you my friend....this is caring write...yeah...we should love the childrens much...outstanding write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Dear Linda,
This a beautiful but sad poem which needed to be written.
Thank you for being you.

Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

Excellent heartrending cry for love and justice for children.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

As usual Linda, this is a superb write.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Well that one sure jerks a person around. Sadly, there are a lot of children in the same boat. Touchingly written.

Man's cruelty to man.
~E

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

another piece that make my heart cries..

i commend you really for your endless love and care and support for children and the needy..

-sniff!-

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Linda,
Your poetry touches me so deeply always.
Peg

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Poetic truth... so sad!

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Sadly, a wonderful compelling write, Linda.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

wonderful write and really great.
Was thinking of the lady who cared the child ... Really nice to see such a lady who really have such a wonderful heart ...
She might be so caring sothat the child wishes to go with her ... what a kind her must be..

she is a wonderful women. U nourished a wonderful personailty thru this write.

~Sanil

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

2-22-03

As There Are Millions Little Children Have No Parents Too Busy F--king Up There Own Lives To Worry About There Little Children,i.e. I TRASK Don't Worry About Them__

I Just take Them Home To (God)__And__

By (God) Damned All Humanity Pays That Price--

You All Are Held In The Eye's Of (God)Just As Responsible For These Little Children Your's Or Not...

TRASK

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Linda,
A heartbreaking write, a heart of gold you have for the care you show for children.
May God Bless You.
Nancy

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Linda, your poetry cries out for love. The child in this needs love, and you speak for so many including myself. Never drop the sword of truth that you use to proclaim your work. Love every line you write. Your friend. Bill