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Young Lovers
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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An invoked fantasy.


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  I took your hand as we walked down the forest path
                A path that only we knew so well
             The trees were shedding their leaves
                   An early Winter crying out
                      Our hearts were joyous
                 It was going to be our first time

            
  Making love with you instilled in me
                   Why I fell in love with you
 
                  Your trust of me, your heart  
                       You validated my soul 
               Holding you close before we left
                               

                                 Tears. . .  

edited 12/9/10 

                      
                  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Young Lovers"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Very beautiful indeed...the sweet innocence of young love is a memory to be treasured always

fee

Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Deborah...your words take me to the days of my days of "Young Love"
the hilled 40 acres had a glorious area of statuesque pines...
this poems tender innocence is beautiful...
in closing of your poem's purity...this line is also so very beautiful:
"You trusted me, gave me inspiration and validity"

Peace & Inspirations to U!
Vickie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
Beautifully written poem,take care

EDWIN


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