AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Teresa Walker, iShirley Woods, i Dadfire, iMatt Miller, iMary Lynn Plaisance, iJ. Allen Wilson, iRochelle Brandon, iJennifer Miller, iAntoinette Kopperfield, iJay Dubya, i

  Home > Action/Thriller > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Kathleen L. McDonald

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 213 Titles
· 1,303 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Aug, 2008

Kathleen L. McDonald, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Eyes Desire
by Kathleen L. McDonald → (All Poetry by Kathleen L. McDonald)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

a structured poem I enjoy doing.(etheree)I did this one and won a contest with it.


Poem Artwork

This
Can not
Be fulfilled
In your life time
For life is too short
And man is too greedy
Not to take more than he needs
From all that is given freely
While he can fulfill his eyes desire
Putting out a heart that is unfired

 

 

 

Often man is tempted by desires
 Doing him more harm than any good
Make his onward path dark and dank
Peace and joy lost to him now
As he travels his path
Alone unhappy
He can now see
Life can be
Joyous
Free


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Eyes Desire"
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 13, 2010
Nice structure that flows with its own transition. Good write!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Uniquely structured with a meaningful message; thank you, Kathi. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
Great job and well formatted as well as strong emotional message of the life we all tend to live...
fee

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 8, 2010
This is really neat! Both the words and the form of it ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 8, 2010
An interlude with a joyous ending. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Koyel Mitra
Reviewed on August 8, 2010
Hi Kathleen enjoyed reading this double ethere poem.Great work.


New Poetry by Kathleen L. McDonald
Popular Poetry (Action/Thriller)
  1.  Reminder To Myself
  2.  I Walk Quietly and Reflectively
  3.  Was
  4.  Cherishing Sounds of Silence
  5.  GOLD ?
  6.  This Aging Moon
  7.  Creepy, Creepy, Scary
  8.  Erotica
  9.  Somewhere They Dance with Angels
  10.  The Toads at Tedder Hall by Jane Air
  11.  Line Drawn In Sand
  12.  BEAUTIFUL LACE
  13.  Best Answers: In Politics and In Life
  14.  Forest Of Dreams
  15.  Release the Demon
  16.  THE GAME
  17.  Beringia
  18.  Kulturparken Småland: A Mirror of Hope
  19.  WE Art Democracy Diversity 1 to 10
  20.  Orphaned Slab
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The Steel Chains of Love by Rose Rideout

I have taken pride in writing this novel as so many people have the wrong impression on bikers because they dress in leather clothing which is to protect themselves in case of an accident. The majority of bikers are known Policemen, Firemen, Doctors,  
Member BookAds

The Gingerbread House by Pamela Ackerson

She was quite capable of taking care of herself...She appreciated everything he was doing for her and the Grandmothers Four, but she needed his help, not for him to take over.  
Member BookAds