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The Desert In His Heart
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The Desert In His Heart



Desert winds flow through his hair,
And the sun has burned his eyes blind,
So that they see only what he was taught to believe;
He does not know any other way to be…

But I shall teach him…

I will show him the beauty and truth,
That flows in the rivers here,
I shall teach him to listen to the winds,
And the ancient stories they love to whisper,
To those that have the ears to hear.

He speaks too loudly and proudly.
I shall hush his voice,
And teach him life is not about control,
But about freedom and wisdom,
About listening and learning,
About loving with your heart,
Not dissecting with your mind,
Questioning every word that is spoken…

I can tell you more with a single glance,
A small smile that is reflected in my eyes,
The touch of my fingers as they brush your hand,
Then you can as you sit and command me to listen,
To all you have to say…

Ah how deeply brown the desert sun has burned him,
How much passion blazes in his blood,
His eyes strain to see beyond the boundaries of his life,
But he does not need his eyes at all!

Ah, how I shall teach him to listen to his heart!
To hold and caress the dream that dwells there,
My dear friend,
If you want love,
You need only to love!

Let that desert wind,
Blow those dark thoughts from your mind!
Seek peace here in my arms,
I shall comfort you,
Care for you,
Teach you to understand the nature of women.

You cannot control the world,
Or what it thinks of you-
You cannot control me.

But I can let you love me,
And teach you how to see,
As one who is beloved,
As one whom I love…



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 Reviews of "The Desert In His Heart"
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
wonderful write!! Brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 9, 2005
Reatta you take this hammer, of course you don't need it because you hammered this one in.

Throw the hammer down,
your word rules profound

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
An exquisitely proffered vow of feminine mystique to heal and balance wayward masculine prerogative. The spritual aspects of the romantic impulse pulls the reader lovingly inside the beautiful flow of these lines.

Reviewed by Rhonda Taylor
Reviewed on October 5, 2005
I think that we all have something to teach someone. ...Nicely done
rhonda

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
A fine poem. Very loving, firm in its softness. An important statement.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 2, 2005
Wise words. A calm feminine touch soothes the parch of the desert wind.

Ron

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on September 27, 2005
Beautiful. This speaks to my soul, Rhetta...Lin

Reviewed by Andrea Williams
Reviewed on September 26, 2005
I loved this poem. I am always drawn to strong men who think they are weak if they are not in control of everything that surrounds them. At first they seem like an Oasis to me and then over time that dries up and i feel thirst like im sipping from from a cactus plant. You are such a talent! well done.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 25, 2005
A love poem,one sided (perhaps) but definately deeply moving and perfectly written.
Beautiful poetry,always,from you.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 24, 2005
He speaks too loudly and proudly.
I shall hush his voice,
And teach him life is not about control,
But about freedom and wisdom,
About listening and learning,
About loving with your heart,
Not dissecting with your mind,
Questioning every word that is spoken…


WOW! You always touch me, Retta.
However, I admit that I am guilty myself of overanlyzing with the mind when I'm afraid in matters of the heart. :-) I don't know about others, but for me fear of rejection is the root. LOL Most men don't respond to this as women and recognize that's the fear overanalyzing. They either lecture about overanalyzing or do what the fear told you they were going to do anyway, leave. ;-) A good long session of love making with some reassuring words would've probably been a better choice if they wanted me around much longer. Then they show up later wondering why I'm not receptive. Oh, the ups and downs of learning trust. Hard work. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on September 20, 2005
A good soulful write, Retta. I truly enjoyed this!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 18, 2005
your spirit soars in this poem!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2005
And the sun has burned his eyes blind,
So that they see only what he was taught to believe;
He does not know any other way to be…

..POIGNANT LINES..

I know love can unteach him what he was taught..I just hope he will WANT it to..
Here's to miracles that can/do happen..
and here's to the Love that glows within you..it's a blessing to have you on this planet..thankyou!

Vesna*

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
a fantastic write

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed on September 13, 2005
Retta, this is a truly magnificient write. Enjoyed Trish...Nice to be reading you again.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 13, 2005
Only Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed on September 13, 2005

A dew of grace slid over the leaf of love to create the energy to
materialize "The Desert In His Heart", poetized with words from
the lexicon of a heart that pumps wonders.

The American Fine Letters has received a new page to enrich The
Major Art, and the history of Poetry's twenty-first century is brighter now.

I salute You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 12, 2005
Retta,
Very peaceful and comforting poem. The greatest gift one can give is to touch another with their heart and soul.

Reviewed on September 10, 2005
Wow, Reindeer,

A lesson many men could use...and women, too. Wise, wonderful and thoughtfully penned! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on September 10, 2005
Every man could use some teaching, this would make him a better person.
Fine penning!

Take care


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 9, 2005
What a wise and beautiful gift you offer, Retta. Teach us all, please! Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on September 9, 2005
Beautiful write Retta, you'd make a wonderful teacher I'm sure.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2005
We can learn heaps if we use our arrid desert times wisely.

The eyes and the tounge tell all to a real listener.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
B e a u t i f u l.

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Retta, this reads like a scene from a motivational high budget hoolywood film and i thank you for letting us in.
excellent +++++

peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Reindeer, your unique flare and choice of words for the obvious allows your reader to “know” what love should be! Excellent work continues to emanate from your remarkable Den. It’s such a pleasure to read your work. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
that we all should be so lucky to find a teacher such as you, Reindeer. wise and wonderful as always. thanks, Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Most outstanding Retta!!

I Love your poetry sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
well done. insightful. mesmerizing. memorizing.
TX

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Your just an awsome writer
Always giving a lot to think about.......
Hope all is well with you.......

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Reindeer, this is grand poetry at its best! I love the message in this gem! Thank you for sharing it!

Eileen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Lovely piece, Reindeer. It left me feeling warm and in a world of my own.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Reindeer! Oh, what wonderful, wise and comforting words! You sing a gentle song of life and love and eternal hereafters! Bravo!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Really beautiful and it speaks
to the desert rat in me. ;)
I loved this write Retta!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
You have made this all so easy ... and it really is ...

Ah, how I shall teach him to listen to his heart!
To hold and caress the dream that dwells there,
My dear friend,
If you want love,
You need only to love!

These are great lines! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Sage

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Good luck with that, dear :)
wonderful expression of love without limits or control
I love the last stanza
Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Excellent flow and belief in the power of love, Reindeer..

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Love the concept and beauty of this write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
A romantic but hopeful look at the power of love to change, Ihope it works for you and the world at large.

Felix

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
wonderful feel to this beautiful write, retta.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Ahh this is sweet, Reindeer. Now I just hope he loves himself enough to let your love-light shine through. Such a beautiful poem filled with hope and the love of a gentle heart and soul.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Ah, Reindeer, when you begin philosophizing and treating the common word as the ultimate weapon against ignorance, you are in a class all by your self.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Ah, a kind and sweet lesson in the gentility of life. Your words are are a tonic for fortunate readers, but heeding your words promises rewards beyond entitlement. A second and third reading of this one is highly recommended. Its effect is effective - in a flow of understanding what others may expect of me. Thank you for a goodun' - Bill

Reviewed by Lori M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
But I can let you love me,
And teach you how to see,
As one who is beloved,
As one whom I love…

I love those lines!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Nice write ... You think a lot before writing something ...

Reviewed on September 8, 2005
Teach him the lesson of life that is the only way he can see beyond the boundries of his life.


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