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Come Journey With Me
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Come Journey With Me…



Come my love,
And journey with me,
Let me show you,
All the beauty I see…

The mountain rises before us,
Like a mighty queen,
Her name is Waydai Buli,
And she will show you
No mercy if you are foolish
Enough to harm her children here…

Waydai Buli,
Our lovely mountain,
Beautiful and so strong,
Merciless in anger…

She will freeze your soul
If you are not wise enough
To know when to come in
From the cold…

Her icy breath,
Her cold fingers,
Will grasp at you,
And you will breathe in
Her misty breath
With every step you take…

You must breathe shallow here,
If you are to survive,
And walk with a quiet step
So you don’t raise her ire…

But she and I,
Are old friends,
I visit her often,
And she cloaks me
In her icy shawl,
And protects me from all…

I would like her to know you,
To see the warmth of your soul,
To kiss those lips of yours,
And feel the love in your heart…


Waydai Buli and I
Are one you see,
She saved me once,
With her icy touch,
Freezing my heart
That once loved too much…

I would like her to see,
What you’re doing to me,
How my heart is melting,
With every word you speak…

I would like her to touch you,
So spring will come again,
And you could see the beauty
That never ends…

Will you journey with me?
Let me share the beauty I see,
The winds that never end,
The trees as high as the sky,
The forest creatures,
Who do not fear man,
The flowers that grow here
In a fierce land…
Would you like to meet her?
Would you take my hand?
Let me introduce her to the man,
That taught my heart how to live again…


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 Reviews of "Come Journey With Me"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
..Master POETESS..THIS GOES INTO MY LIBRARY..EXQUISITE write..I am in awe!!! ty

vesna

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
This is one of your best! I hope you have it in the contest. Love the photo of the mountain. The warning so true!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
{{{Reindeer}}}
wonderful Journey with you ...
Really refreshing and really wonderful...
Thanks a lot for this lovely write ...
This was indeed a great and nice write ..
< < <Sanil>>>

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Such splendour and beauty!

~Joseph

Reviewed on August 29, 2003
gorgeous write, reindeer; you are so wise and talented, and i love your writes! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Breathtaking imagery and so beautifully written, Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
A stunning and well written journey.......Your poetry is always top of the class.....ty, Dani

Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Retta:

This one is so enchanting and spellbound. Love this a lot!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Retta,
This is beautiful and filled with strong imagery!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
wow!
iike the way that you have
drawn the character of the mountain

good write

john+

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Beautiful words here Retta. They seemed to flow across the page, never missing a step. Enjoyed! ~SH~

Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Nature is in itself a source of endless inspiration, as is love... also a force of nature. You always capture this essence in your writes, Reindeer. Beautiful.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Would you take my hand?
Let me introduce her to the man,
That taught my heart how to live again…

Magic words, I have been there, I am still there, and I pray for you that this is the soulmate created for you. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Awesomely beautiful....a melting heart?

I know that feeling...just one word...and my knees goes weak!!

Shit it's hard to love the wrong one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
superb write!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
A wondrous journey indeed!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
What a prolific write - beautiful and very well done!

Tami

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Exceptional poetry Reindeer! Superb imagery!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
I love your nature writes......


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