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Phlebotomy
by Carol Dee Meeks → (All Poetry by Carol Dee Meeks)
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This poem is called a RONDEL

She has a vein
Phlebitis swell
that makes her yell
and cry in pain.

With walking cane
she moves like snail,
she has a vein
Phlebitis swell.

The sore, arcane,
like atom cell
that grew when fell
makes her insane
she has a vein
Phlebitis swell.


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 Reviews of "Phlebotomy"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Fantastic write!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Very good display and well crafted Rondel!

~Nikki~

Reviewed on May 17, 2004
(((carol)))

nice rondel! phlebotomists...*cringe* i have roll-y veins...takes at least three sticks *ow*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Carol, I know a phlebotomy is not a laughing matter. But I can't help thinking of the time I was in the hospital and a nurse got so mad at me she told me to ask the doctor for a phlebotomy, and I thanked her for it.
P.S. After the doctor talked to the nurse, he promised to put me on the list for one, and I was actually mad when they released me without it. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
You do the form justice. Nice job. Enjoyed.


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