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Creation
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The sun's rays over the lawn... ...take me way beyond the immediate.


Poem Artwork

Creation


Before my eyes
The sudden light
Of dawn
Reveals
Upon the jeweled carpet
Of the lawn
The wondrous birth
Of a universe

A million brilliant shimmering orbs
Spherical rainbow planets
Shine
Against the backdrop
Of an emerald eternity

I god
I dare not trod
Further

Lest I destroy
What I did not create



Copyright © Regis Auffray
October 2004
All Rights Reserved


 

 
 

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 Reviews of "Creation"
Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on August 19, 2014
Not to repeat some of the words in these reviews from others which are numerous in each of your poems, Regis, I think of different words to say = for this one I repeat some of the other reviewers - Brilliant,A work of Art, a Wonderful message,Awesome, fantastic, splendid. just in my opinion, I would be with you and not destroy that which I did not create.

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on October 18, 2013
Beautiful poem yet not sure what you mean by the phrase "I god"...

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Brilliant! Love the flow and wisdom here.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
Absolutely beautiful Regis.....what a beauty makes my day even brighter! Thank you so much for sharing and for caring! God bless
and keep you always in His Tender Care!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Hi Regis, You are a creator, none the less... a god of words and limericks...you have to know that. This makes me appreciate creation more.... thank you for that...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Milton Handfield
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
Another work of art. I wish i could utilize the way you do. A remainder of the splenders of nature.

cheers
Milton

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on July 24, 2008
you are SUCH a great writer, Reg, you make me nuts when you say you are not

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 22, 2007
Regis,

Love the picture; it's beautiful and it brings your poem to life. Again, one must be humble to have these feelings. This poem speaks of a time when you must have been feeling an inch tall in comparison to God's work. Lovely imagery~

Sheila

Reviewed by Jolen Whitworth (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2007
A wonderful message. Finely crafted, it leaves the reader plenty of room. It reminds me of a quote I love...

"You can tear a poem apart to see what makes it tick... The best craftsmanship always leaves holes and gaps... so that something that is not in the poem can creep, crawl, flash or thunder in."
-- —Dylan Thomas

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Powerful! Outstanding message.
I loved the picture as well.

Patti

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
A beautiful tribute to nature.

Janet

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on November 7, 2004
All that He gave to us, all the wonders we have to enjoy, he asks only that we preserve and enjoy all of creation, feel free to tred where you please and soak up the wonders of creation.

Lovely write Regis
Peace be with you
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on October 28, 2004
:-)

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on October 25, 2004
You, a creative poet, have a way of making us feel and visualize what you write.

Reviewed by Reverend Davey (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2004
Very visual! Really good. Now I mustlook to see if I can see any rainbows! If I can get up that early!


Blessings, Rev Davey

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on October 14, 2004
Gentle and generous appeal to live the very moment. Wonderful ambience in this verbal picture of love and light. Franz

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
I still think you should be an artist. try photography.

Connie

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
Awesome message. The ending is fantastic.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 10, 2004
fantastic poem!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 10, 2004
Excellently Done Good Weary Of (God) Path My Feet Have Trod,i.e. You Regis Have No Need To Fear (God) Or TRASK!

TRASK

Reviewed on October 10, 2004
Regis,

"Creation" creatively yours - mastered to perfection ... thanks for this one, my friend!!

Robert

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 10, 2004
Reverential awe and wonder on a micro and macro-scale here, Regis! Love this both-ends-of-the-telescope write and you have skilfully captured both omnipotence and fragility in just a few delicately crafted and kaleidoscope lines. Your last 18 syllables neatly communicate what libraries of books fail to! What a gift! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 10, 2004
Love the imagery, very moving
poem Regis. Thank you for sharing
with me! Super Duper Job!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Compelling imagery, Regis. Very much enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Deep poem, awesome picture. Good job!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
You are so good at creating and projecting images with your words, it almost feels like I'm there as an observer, and not a reader. Great work, Regis.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
truly fantastic work! the last five lines are outstanding ... the imagery of the entire poem is very vivid ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Reg...You are a wondrous poet....as your work of arts show...
This is simply a terrific compositon which gives a fascinating insight
into the morning dew of heaven...
Peter

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Well Penned ...Regis
most enjoyable piece

William ....Peace

Reviewed on October 9, 2004
(((o, my, regis)))

thought provoking, and powerfully visualized through your glorious pen! GORGEOUS! literally took my breath away--BRAVO!

i pray you are well, dear (((friend))), i miss you :(

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
A beautiful reverence in this superb poem Regis!
Thank you for sharing! eileen

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Spherical rainbow planets
Shine

so lyrical!

Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Terrific stuff, mon ami! LOVE it! Well done; magnifique!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
this is amazing as usual Regis, Keep up the great work!!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Spendidly penned Regis

Blue skies and sunshine

Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Great images of the morning dew Regis

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Beautiful...imagine all the little worlds in each drop of dew! Lovely poetry Regis - as always.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Regis....you have captured the moment perfectly my friend....such a delightful write from you yet again....keep up the great work you are doing...never stop to write....love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed on October 9, 2004
intersting Reg, I did one similar to this called a "thousand Universes." back some time. Enjd the read. We are God's over the lower creations. G

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
love it...
thanks Regis

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
you have captured the luminous beauty of the momrnt --

well done


j+

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Magnificent creation, Regis.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Regis my friend, I needed the peace and beauty of this poem today. Michelle

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
This is pure beauty Regis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
I really like the way you form pictures with words. This one is vivid and beautiful.
Janet

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
ohhhhh lovely!!
secret worlds in the grass!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Love it!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Superb imagery for your creation

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Beautiful Regis.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
You created a beautiful poem herein and the picture is another wonderful creation both by god, you sir Regis...Find Peace, Ed & rufuz


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