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The Message
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A note in a bottle drifting at sea,
With a message for someone, who will it be?
The message inside it so long locked away,
Needing more to be read, with each passing day.

How many years its been drifting around,
In wait of the current to wash it a ground.
Waiting for someone its message to read,
Someone, who is looking, someone in need.

A few times it has found its way to the beach,
Hoping that someone will see it and reach.
But then once again it’s washed out with the tide,
It’s long unread message still locked up inside.

The message inside of it, penned by the hand,
Of a lonely young man, from a far away land.
He then cast his message out to the sea,
In hope that a lonely young lady might see.

As he stands waiting for her on a far away shore,
She walks the beach looking, not knowing what for.
They long for each other, together to be.
His long unread message, still adrift in the sea.

Jack Roberts – Sept 2002


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 Reviews of "The Message"
Reviewed by S. Holland (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
There is nothing trite about your rhyming poetry..a beautiful cross between metered and free verse.

Reviewed by Lorena Evans (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
You should not have kept these treasures from the world for so long! You are truly blessed with a magnificent talent. This one is off the scale, my friend.

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2002
I can tell a true poet,when I read the beauty of the spoken words.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 14, 2002
Bloody fantastic!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 9, 2002
This was a sad lonely poem exquisetly told

Reviewed by Wanda Harrell
Reviewed on September 9, 2002
Touching...heart-stirring! Bravo!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on September 9, 2002
beautiful verse, and wonderful rythym and flow!

Reviewed by Smoke Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2002
How Beautiful~ and painful at the same time. Great write.........keep going Jack your doing fantastic

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 4, 2002
This is so romantic! I loved the
longing in this...the yearning of
two lovers yet to meet. Beautiful!


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