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Helpless
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Have you ever felt helpless, not a thing you could do,
When something is being taken away from you.
You’ve tried everything, and then tried it again,
But try as you may you just can’t seem to win.

Suppose that an oak tree, mighty and tall,
Wanted to keep all his leaves in the fall.
He’s no way to hold them, he can’t make them stay.
When autumn’s wind comes, and just blows them away.

Its out of his hands, it doesn’t seem fair,
That what once was his will no longer be there.
His roots deep in the ground, he’s no choice but to stay,
And watch all the leaves that he loved blow away.

Jack Roberts – September 2002


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 Reviews of "Helpless"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
now matter how big and powerful you are....sometimes you gotta go where the wind blows!!!
love it

Reviewed by Larry K.
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
Well expressed in words... as a father I can feel that helpless feeling

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
Oh my this is so beautiful, it makes me think of my children leaving home and me missing them and there's nothing I could do but let them "fly". wonderful writing Jack. Floria

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2002
I love this one! I'm going to think of this as I sweep the mountains of leaves from my patio. Great write. Thanks, Jack!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
Jack ,
excellent poem, captured
sadness , pain and being lost.. very good!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
Beautiful Jack ~ I think we
have all had that helpless
feeling at one time or
another! You described it
perfectly as the winds steal
the last leaf from the tree.
Awesome!

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
reminds me of a lost love that blew away with the wind
great write

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
This is truly a wonderful poem, full of intensity so sofly spoken.

Reviewed by Smoke Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
wonderful..sad..painful....feeling lost ......
WONDERFUL JOB


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