The biggest show in all the land,
Has come and gone again.
Smoke the rabbit showed her stuff,
And came home with a win.
She was primed and looking good,
With her coat a shinny red.
When compared to all the other reds,
Smoke just knocked them dead.
I knew she’d be a winner,
When I gave her that nice name.
Her name is “Smoke” the rabbit,
And Smokinnnnnnn.. is her game.
Best of Variety
Red Satin
2002 ARBA National Convention
Named for my good buddy, Smoke Martin.
Jack Roberts – October 17 2002
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Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Jack I was looking at more of your poems and
when I came across your rabit smoke I had
to laugh" he reminds me of my rabbit Benji
which is overweight and eating up my wall
paper and phone lines but I love him. a very
sweet and lovely write I am a animal lover
be sure to check the one I will be posting
about the backyard junkies.
Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Such a great write...I have a rabbit also. It is all snow white his name is Mr. Rabbit lol
I loved your poem..Mr. Rabbit is smart also you'll see in a minute. lol Excellent write!
Betty
Reviewed by Smoke Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
Of course my name sake would do good. but boy did that tatoo in my ear hurt!!!!!! Thanks buddy for the honor of the namesake and the poem!
Smoke
lovely tribute to a lovely lady!! enjoyed this a lot!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2002
Yes Jack great article. You need to read:
"Pussy Galore." My monkey "Curious George"
is waiting for "Smoke" after he finishes with Pussy. Just comedy. The rabbit looks great! Bill
My grandaughter would go wild, she has 2rabbits, and loves them. Can't remember the name but one is top of her class...your Red is gorgeous. Nice work!!!
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when I came across your rabit smoke I had
to laugh" he reminds me of my rabbit Benji
which is overweight and eating up my wall
paper and phone lines but I love him. a very
sweet and lovely write I am a animal lover
be sure to check the one I will be posting
about the backyard junkies.
I loved your poem..Mr. Rabbit is smart also you'll see in a minute. lol Excellent write!
Betty
Smoke
congratulations...
"Pussy Galore." My monkey "Curious George"
is waiting for "Smoke" after he finishes with Pussy. Just comedy. The rabbit looks great! Bill
Thanks for your comment..
Jenni