beautiful ....especially the last two stanzas....I am smilling.......A
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
Really good imagery and rhythm, Jack. I think you may want clouds hide the sun. I try to give an honest review, Jack, and don't follow the crowd-But this is a good poem. Thanks- Jerry
Reviewed by Janice (Jan) Jarnagin (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2002
Jack,
Another beautiful write. Nature seems to inspire you...and you write it wonderfully. You have drawn pictures with your words for my eyes to see....I'm enjoying the view.
Many smiles,
Jan (Janice)
Another beautiful write. Nature seems to inspire you...and you write it wonderfully. You have drawn pictures with your words for my eyes to see....I'm enjoying the view.
Many smiles,
Jan (Janice)
I love your writes.
10+
A lovely bright poem, enjoyed!