Sometimes I think my life is a dream and I can hardly wait to wake up. Other times I think my life is a dream and I hope I don't wake up. What I really want to say is that this is a really good poem on a very interesting subject.
Wow!! I love this! I write a few "dream" poems for the Den, but nothing as wonderful as this :) I like your rhythm, it's an inspiration. I think I like this best:
"Some close their eyes and dream at night
Of someone close to hold them tight
Others sit and dream each day
Of another life so far away "
That's very much who I am :) I think you captured the dreamer very beautifully in this poem. Heart jerker :)
Hi Jack,
I must agree with everyone...
This is absolutely beautiful...
Trixie :)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Fantastic writing Jack. I love the rhyme!! Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I believe that we have to dream before we can create our wish-fulfilling reality.
Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Another beauty of a write!! BRAVO!!! Dreams do come true!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Love this one, Jack!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I believe in dreams coming true too, Jack... beautiful write :)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I also believe in dreams. Thank you Jack.. This is a great write...
Melanie
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
"...seek ye first the kingdom of God, and His righteousness; and all these THINGS shall be added unto you.." (Matt. 6:33) To me, that's how dreams come true! Great write, Jack!
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I'm a dreamer and I will always be a dreamer. Seems I'm in good company with all of us here who dream. Great poem.
--Susan
Dreams are what keep us striving to reach our goals (our dreams). The circle is complete. Great write.
The Voice
"Some close their eyes and dream at night
Of someone close to hold them tight
Others sit and dream each day
Of another life so far away "
That's very much who I am :) I think you captured the dreamer very beautifully in this poem. Heart jerker :)
--Brittany Renee
I must agree with everyone...
This is absolutely beautiful...
Trixie :)
Melanie