One summer day while fishing, tired from casting to the stream,
I dozed off on the riverbank and I began to dream.
I dreamed that I was praying in a field beneath the sun,
And I asked Him to forgive me for some sin that I had done.
When I had finished praying I was much surprised to see,
That now there was another man standing there with me.
He said “I heard you praying and that’s very good to do,
But I really think I need to have a little talk with you”.
“I know that you believe in me and I think that you should know,
Just what it was I did for you so very long ago”.
“If you read in your bible then I think that you will see,
That I said that it was “finished” when I died there on that tree”.
“You’ve accepted what I did back then, and I’d think that that would do,
Or should I die upon that cross again just for you “?
I asked him then what should I say at times when I have sinned,
He said “ Just say I’m sorry Lord, then don’t do it again.
I wanted to say more to him but I didn’t have the time
For just then I was awakened by a tug upon my line,
With the dream still vivid in my mind I watched the river flow.
As I thanked him for forgiving me so very long ago.
Jack Roberts – December 14, 2002
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Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Thank you Jack for inviting me to read this
beautiful heart felt poem, I love to fish
myself I get such a comfort being at the water When God gives us something it is for
to share and it's a gift from him experience
is our best teacher and you have showed it here so well...
It is a comfort to know the depth of your spirit and the creative ability you have for animating all our feelings. You have soul and your beat is perfectly suited for a full heart. Don't stop. Keep indulging your readers with the rich treasure that God gave you and that we all love. Tug at our hearts and please give us more. I say we for I know I speak for all your readers.
--Susan
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2002
Yes! When He died for us, all our sins were Future ones! Now, we only have to confess them to keep in close fellowship with Him.
(I John 1:9) Thanks for this great write!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2002
A swim in the stream of truth....Jack, you are a wonderful poet...Your poems are beautiful. Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2002
Jack,
This poem has touched my heart..It is really a wonderful, powerful write..With so much wisdom in it..What a beautiful, truthful write..Jack, this write really touched my heart..because I truthfully believe every word of it..Outstanding write!
Merry Christmas,
Be blessed,
Betty
Superb write! Yes, you are forgiven!!!!! This one should get published!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2002
Who needs to go to church when so many truths can be found by the click of a mouse? or just by opening our heart to the truths that are within our reality? Keep dreaming and sharing :-)
Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2002
This was such a treat to find this Sunday morning !! Well done...
the delight of fishing is the anticipation of the catch...
Reviewed by Janice (Jan) Jarnagin (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2002
Oh, Wow!! This is so very touching. This can really make a person pause to think. A wonderful write, I enjoyed this very much. Smiles and hugs, Jan
Reviewed by Bill Sowman
Reviewed on December 14, 2002
Jack, this brought tears to my eyes and my heart. Bill Murray
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beautiful heart felt poem, I love to fish
myself I get such a comfort being at the water When God gives us something it is for
to share and it's a gift from him experience
is our best teacher and you have showed it here so well...
Love Mary
It is a comfort to know the depth of your spirit and the creative ability you have for animating all our feelings. You have soul and your beat is perfectly suited for a full heart. Don't stop. Keep indulging your readers with the rich treasure that God gave you and that we all love. Tug at our hearts and please give us more. I say we for I know I speak for all your readers.
--Susan
(I John 1:9) Thanks for this great write!
This poem has touched my heart..It is really a wonderful, powerful write..With so much wisdom in it..What a beautiful, truthful write..Jack, this write really touched my heart..because I truthfully believe every word of it..Outstanding write!
Merry Christmas,
Be blessed,
Betty
Renee
This is such a great piece. It has an awesome message.
The Voice
This is such an outstanding write...
Actually touched my
heart...
Thanks for your kind comments on mine..
Trixie
loved it.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Heartfelt and moving.
Thank you for the kind
reviews on my poems.
and spiritual needs. Great write Jack.
P.S. Having heck of a time getting a comment on here. It ate my first one.
Then posted too quick on the second try.