You described my garden exactly but spring comes long before the butterflies return here, in fact we don't see butterflies here until well into the summer. It's still an excellent poem.
Me too! I love butterflies and have a few poems about my winged friends. In this poem the air is void of the flutter of color and the reader will agree to missing the Monarchs, Swallowtails and all the other animated colors gives us to appreciate.
Very well done from this Nature Lover.
Try www.fieldandforest.com
go to the nature poetry and I think you might find friends there.
__Susan
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Sweet, and thoughtful.
~E
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Jack, this is soooo wonderful..I am a lover of snow and winter but after awhile I too year for the green. Great rhyming. Floria
Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Wonderful!!!
I love the flow and imagery in this!!
Sally
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Jack beautiful write.... this is excellent!
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Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Beautiful poetry Jack.....the sort I love most. I too love butterflies, in fact I've just finished a poem about that very subject. Ty, Dani
Jack that was wonderful! The rhyme and the imagery, it was like a film before my eyes. Or a diary found in some forbidden place, now opened up to a world of greatness. Great and creative poem.
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Very well done from this Nature Lover.
Try www.fieldandforest.com
go to the nature poetry and I think you might find friends there.
__Susan
~E
I love the flow and imagery in this!!
Sally
"When the butterflies return. "
Peggy
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