This was incredible! I felt chills down my spine. What a glorious write that you made. For your first time at this type of poem...you did so awesomely! ;) Silver
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2003
Please do more of these...this is so lovely! However, I'm glad it's fiction! :)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2003
Hey! We think alike. Beautiful Jack, you're good at this style. Thanks, Dani
Wonderful, Jack! Kept my attention throughout, not just reading, but flashing your words into my life and imagining how it would be if I was in your place...Great fiction, I'm not sure I could do as well.
Erin
:)
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Jack .. lovely heartfelt write... you should write more of these ...excellent write.
It is my life you wrote... that rose could have been placed on my friends grave.. mine would be yellow. for everlasting friendship.. I really felt this one.. Job well done..
Well Jack, I must say that for somebody that was jut "trying something out" you done an excellent job of this. Goes to prove you may need to expand your horizons. I'm sure you would do well at that too. Made me cry, that's when I'm positive that I'm in the midst of a beautiful poem and and extra talented writer,,,Keep writing,,,Lisa
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Wonderful try at this "sort of write." In fact, it's very, very good...
The first stanza made me cry. Such a moving and lonely piece this is Jack. Exquisitely written.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Jack,
breathless in tears and this fiction was so surreal I loved every ounce of this wonderful write. please more of this creative fiction so touching cause someone out here in the world can relate to it....
Lady Peg
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Jack,
This is very touching. I feel you can do many more of these.... Keep them flowing.
The Voice
Reviewed by Julie Gaskins (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Jack,
This is beautiful. I really enjoyed it and look forward to many more.
Jack, this write brought me to
tears. It's incredible. You
made me feel every emotion as
I was reading. You put yourself
in anothers shoes VERY well, my
friend.
10+++++++++++++
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breathless in tears and this fiction was so surreal I loved every ounce of this wonderful write. please more of this creative fiction so touching cause someone out here in the world can relate to it....
Lady Peg
This is very touching. I feel you can do many more of these.... Keep them flowing.
The Voice
This is beautiful. I really enjoyed it and look forward to many more.
Julie
Nancy
I loved this poem. Please do more of them. You have a unique way of walking in someone else's shoes.
tears. It's incredible. You
made me feel every emotion as
I was reading. You put yourself
in anothers shoes VERY well, my
friend.
10+++++++++++++
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